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A Best Friend You Were
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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A broken twisted soul
You have found
You picked me up
And then I suddenly hit the ground
You gave me happiness
You gave me a best friend
But you ripped my heart
In the end
You took away the pain
And gave it right back
Now my light
Has gone black
A best friend you were
Then you broke my heart
A best friend you were
Then you tore me apart
A best friend you were
But depression, once again it must start
A best friend you were
You filled my heart
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2004-09-02 19:24:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Best Friend You Were
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:25:42 PM AEST (User
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Best friends can do that, but its also to the one who holds a best friend, that forgets the others feelings........good luck and hope all works for the best. Nice write , tho!
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Re: A Best Friend You Were
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheRaven on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:32:07 PM AEST (User
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very good...short and simple sentences, to the point. i can definitely connect with this one, good job.
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Re: A Best Friend You Were
(User Rating: 1 ) by essab88 on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:11:16 PM AEST (User
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nice poem. friends you will make u feel like alot. ive learned from all the mistakes theyve made. *smile* |
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