Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 13:39:51 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 62246 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Killing Me Silently [time] => 2004-09-01 22:07:48 [hometext] => Life is what we make of it, nothing in my case. [bodytext] => Killing Me Silently

Lashing out against you
This is the problem
This world means nothing
To me; it never did

This is the point
In the redundancy of life
Nothing is worth it
To survive

Not caring
Would be the bliss to be felt
Caring so much for others
And nothing for myself

Giving up
In this situation
Killing me silently
Is this life again

Killing me
Is what I've done
Regretting living
For failed expectation

I'm failing myself again
From the life I have made
I'm lashing out at you
To just understand [comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Killing Me Silently

Contributed by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Killing Me Silently

Lashing out against you
This is the problem
This world means nothing
To me; it never did

This is the point
In the redundancy of life
Nothing is worth it
To survive

Not caring
Would be the bliss to be felt
Caring so much for others
And nothing for myself

Giving up
In this situation
Killing me silently
Is this life again

Killing me
Is what I've done
Regretting living
For failed expectation

I'm failing myself again
From the life I have made
I'm lashing out at you
To just understand




Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-09-01 22:07:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Killing Me Silently (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Tradgicly sad,
so softly spoken
once i was mad
likely broken
i heard these things
with pen & paper

I admire your style
This is something i feel
?


Re: Killing Me Silently (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 05:53:23 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Lash away, if it makes you feel better about yourself, then allow me to me thy target of emotional release.
Beautifully written but your poems always are, and so full of sadness.

Please Take care of your self as best you know how

Karl


Re: Killing Me Silently (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:49:57 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Love your work, I really enjoyed reading your poem. So sad, yet screams out to me describing your emotions so bluntly. Great job!


Re: Killing Me Silently (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:22:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Tomorrow
Is to far away
So I will live to feel today
I don't want to wake up sometimes
Sometimes words don't come together to rhyme
Tomorrow
Can't save the things that happened yesterday
Can't make them go away or go your way
Can't tell how I am gonna feel tomorrow
Can't tell if things will be better tomorrow
Tomorrow
Is just to far away to plan for
But I still have some hope inside
To spend time with you again or
I would settle for anything
Even to see you passing by
Tomorrow
Is filled with so many things I want to say
When we are face to face I will be ok
I want to breath outloud the words inside me
But I hold my breath in and I don't know why


Re: Killing Me Silently (User Rating: 1 )
by AndTheFoolShallBurn on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:58:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Bleak, yet hopeful in a 'watch out for myself' kind of way...beautiful.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com