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Array ( [sid] => 62241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Undying Love For You [time] => 2004-09-01 21:17:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Theres no way to explain how I love you so
Its something you will never know
Its killing me to see you do this to yourself
This is badly effecting your health

You dont know how its hurting me now
I cry for you and hurt for you
Im so worried and scared for you
You dont know what its putting me through

Why are you doing this? I cant stand anymore
What are you doing this for?
You dont understand, and how it makes me feel
To know I can never help your wounds heal
You dont see me, Im nothing real

It seems like your rejection my help
You wont even try, Do you want to die?
Like I said before
And I cant explain this more
If you died then I would too
I cant live in this world without you
But I dont know what to do

I want to give up, But i wont, I cant
Even if its the last thing I do
Im going to help you live through

I wish you would give me a glance
I just want one chance
But that will never happen
Its something I will always imagine

We will always be friends, nothing more, nothing less
Not to me, But its for the best
So please dont be sad all the time
If your not happy ill never rest,
Now even in death


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My Undying Love For You

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:17:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Theres no way to explain how I love you so
Its something you will never know
Its killing me to see you do this to yourself
This is badly effecting your health

You dont know how its hurting me now
I cry for you and hurt for you
Im so worried and scared for you
You dont know what its putting me through

Why are you doing this? I cant stand anymore
What are you doing this for?
You dont understand, and how it makes me feel
To know I can never help your wounds heal
You dont see me, Im nothing real

It seems like your rejection my help
You wont even try, Do you want to die?
Like I said before
And I cant explain this more
If you died then I would too
I cant live in this world without you
But I dont know what to do

I want to give up, But i wont, I cant
Even if its the last thing I do
Im going to help you live through

I wish you would give me a glance
I just want one chance
But that will never happen
Its something I will always imagine

We will always be friends, nothing more, nothing less
Not to me, But its for the best
So please dont be sad all the time
If your not happy ill never rest,
Now even in death






Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-09-01 21:17:04]
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Re: My Undying Love For You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:32:18 PM AEST
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Kindda sad but full with luv, understanding, endurence, patience, faith and hope.
Strength 2 u,
emy


Re: My Undying Love For You (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:24:11 AM AEST
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You said it all and very elegantly too, have been in that spot on only one end......and sometimes we don't have a choice....it is better to be a friend to the end.

Thanks for sharing this.

Chris


Re: My Undying Love For You (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:59:20 PM AEST
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Sometimes it is better to be a friend. I am there, and will offer my friendship to the end, At this point maybe that is the best thing for both of you.


Re: My Undying Love For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:52:20 PM AEST
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Oh Willow...what an endearing declaration of love... I wish it was reciprocated.....
Hugs and luv,
Jenni




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