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[aid] => mick
[title] => When The Wind Whispers To Me......
[time] => 2004-09-01 20:55:01
[hometext] => please comment, one of my longer poems!!!
[bodytext] => Standing on the last great eclipse of the world,
I watch as the Earth emerges from it's cocoon.
The rebirth causes an upset in power.
Time stands still,
As the Dynasty collapses.
The candle light settles into the night,
Where the shadows and people collide.
A rose whispers of an unfufilled love,
As the moon softly cuts into the sky.
Silently the rain comes down,
On a dreary and drunken road.
Wearily I walk alone,
As the rain burns into my skin.
Embrace me, Embrace love, Embrace me.
Do not leave me here under the willow,
Like petals crushed underfoot.
I will stay here,
Waiting for you.
Until the winter comes
And I am buried in the snow.
Until the mourning spring
Covers me in dew.
And in the fall
When the wind whispers to me........of you.
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[informant] => deadreckoning1983
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When The Wind Whispers To Me......
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:55:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Standing on the last great eclipse of the world,
I watch as the Earth emerges from it's cocoon.
The rebirth causes an upset in power.
Time stands still,
As the Dynasty collapses.
The candle light settles into the night,
Where the shadows and people collide.
A rose whispers of an unfufilled love,
As the moon softly cuts into the sky.
Silently the rain comes down,
On a dreary and drunken road.
Wearily I walk alone,
As the rain burns into my skin.
Embrace me, Embrace love, Embrace me.
Do not leave me here under the willow,
Like petals crushed underfoot.
I will stay here,
Waiting for you.
Until the winter comes
And I am buried in the snow.
Until the mourning spring
Covers me in dew.
And in the fall
When the wind whispers to me........of you.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
... [
2004-09-01 20:55:01]
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by DerPinguin44 on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:01:31 PM AEST
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| I'm guessing this is about a ninja or a couple who broke up. |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:15:24 PM AEST
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Hey Kiddo.....I loved this.... I'm not gonna guess tho..... I just think the flow and imagery was great.......
(bet you can't make a Haiku out of this one) lmao....
Jenni |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by freespirit on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:10:28 AM AEST
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I realy like this one im glad that we have some good poets out there thank you for
sharring with us God Bless Freespirit |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by artostuff on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:22:17 AM AEST
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| I like this, wonderful imagery. Its a good read. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:02:26 PM AEST
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| This guy is a helluva poet. He writes about all kinds of things, uses cool words that stimulate the imagination, and he's not afraid to write emotional poems. His sheer enthusiasm for poetry is something I really like to see . Way to go, Bonehead. --Mothy |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:41:59 PM AEST
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| you left me in tears......like petals crushed underfoot I will stay here, waiting for you......beautiful work...... |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:39:07 PM AEST
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Interesting ... I never would have guessed a ninja couple ... I was picturing a grieving person weeping before a grave stone .... but oh well .... A fabulous write with strong emotion, and vivid imagery, I liked that.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:52:25 AM AEST
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I really like this one.Alot of imagination,
So sad yet so beautiful........ |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:10:23 PM AEST
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| Well done! |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:19:41 PM AEST
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Dane, I loved this. It's one of those poems that captivate you and keep
you spellbound to the end. Wonderfully descriptive and such tortured
rapture. I absolutely LOVE the last line.
Exquisite.
~Breezy |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 07:54:42 PM AEST
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| This poem is just so calming and draws you right into it. It reminded me of the movie Willow Park I think its called, the image of someone waiting for a love to return. |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 08:07:48 PM AEST
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| or maybe that was Wicker Park?...lol |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by AsILayDying on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:23:22 PM AEST
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| sweet write |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 12:05:28 AM AEST
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wow! the reality shines in your poetry, the beauty- it
radiates, this poem, as your poetry breathes.....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: When The Wind Whispers To Me......
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 01:01:12 PM AEST
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Woweee!!! I am absolutely entranced by your beautiful imagery. Swept up by the beauty in your words. This is poetry in every way.
Stunning.
~Scorp |
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