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Array ( [sid] => 62218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Point Of View [time] => 2004-09-01 16:52:28 [hometext] => i started high school a couple days ago and i already dislike it strongly this poems about a teen growing up around others who only bring her down and hopes one day they'll learn a lesson from their actions [bodytext] => ***
What did I ever do to you
That is the question
But the point is
I did nothing to deserve this
My feelings are more important
Than an image
I don't feel the need to be around you
If all you care about is what's on the outside
What's in the past
Is the past
It's not like
I can go back
And change everything
You have to allow me to move on
Because I can't do it alone
I can't move on
With all these ridicules you throw my way
Why did you have to ruin me
Why do you have to treat me horribly
Just by what you see
....But just so you know
You haven't had the best of me
The things you do
Or say
Hurt others
More than you think
You'll feel this way
Someday
Just remember the next time you do this
That those very words
Could be the cause of someones death! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 25 [informant] => WestCPunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
My Point Of View

Contributed by WestCPunk on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:52:28 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



***
What did I ever do to you
That is the question
But the point is
I did nothing to deserve this
My feelings are more important
Than an image
I don't feel the need to be around you
If all you care about is what's on the outside
What's in the past
Is the past
It's not like
I can go back
And change everything
You have to allow me to move on
Because I can't do it alone
I can't move on
With all these ridicules you throw my way
Why did you have to ruin me
Why do you have to treat me horribly
Just by what you see
....But just so you know
You haven't had the best of me
The things you do
Or say
Hurt others
More than you think
You'll feel this way
Someday
Just remember the next time you do this
That those very words
Could be the cause of someones death!




Copyright © WestCPunk ... [ 2004-09-01 16:52:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My Point Of View (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:27:43 PM AEST
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hey nice piece of work... you have expressed only too well how many people have felt at school by the ridicules people throw there way and put them down.... i belive in what goes around comes around just like you


Re: My Point Of View (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:16:18 PM AEST
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well i went back to highschool aug 11th. and i too strongly disliked it. i understand your poem fully, recently its been showing in my writes =/. excellent write.


Re: My Point Of View (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:39:18 AM AEST
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Yeah people judge way to much! they live in the past and thrive off of ruining other's lives just to make themselves look more stronger...but it just makes them an ass...what are they getting out of this anyways?? after highschool they are nothing...just a lonely person in a world of billions...what they did then and who they knew and also who they were means nothing in the world! *****en idiots! I hate them all!

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