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Array ( [sid] => 62189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => While it lasts [time] => 2004-09-01 11:47:12 [hometext] => This is my last poem that I made for my ex-crush lol, he's such a jerk. [bodytext] => Standing tall I walk away, muttering the last good-bye,
Heart already broken, but no more will I cry,
Im sick of all the hurt, the fact that I never gain,
Tired of sitting here waiting, fed up with all the pain,
I've waited and waited for you, but I guess you'll never change,
Im done with putting you first, I'll no longer re-arrange,
Maybe you should have told me sooner, you should have said no,
But now it's crystal clear to me, that's why Im turning to go,
I won't follow you any longer, I don't really care,
But don't come crawling back to me, Justin don't you dare,
Cuz I've told you how I feel, but you just don't even care,
But soon she won't be with you, only I'd be standing there,
But thanks to your ignorance, neither will I,
Thanks for leading me on, thanks for telling me lies,
I guess you taught me a lesson, one I had to learn,
That guys aren't what they seem, they like to watch you burn,
So baby I hope you have fun, atleast while it lasts,
If you ever come back to me, you can kiss my ***.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 22 [informant] => XxNights_ChildxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
While it lasts

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 11:47:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Standing tall I walk away, muttering the last good-bye,
Heart already broken, but no more will I cry,
Im sick of all the hurt, the fact that I never gain,
Tired of sitting here waiting, fed up with all the pain,
I've waited and waited for you, but I guess you'll never change,
Im done with putting you first, I'll no longer re-arrange,
Maybe you should have told me sooner, you should have said no,
But now it's crystal clear to me, that's why Im turning to go,
I won't follow you any longer, I don't really care,
But don't come crawling back to me, Justin don't you dare,
Cuz I've told you how I feel, but you just don't even care,
But soon she won't be with you, only I'd be standing there,
But thanks to your ignorance, neither will I,
Thanks for leading me on, thanks for telling me lies,
I guess you taught me a lesson, one I had to learn,
That guys aren't what they seem, they like to watch you burn,
So baby I hope you have fun, atleast while it lasts,
If you ever come back to me, you can kiss my ***.




Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-09-01 11:47:12]
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Re: While it lasts (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 06:07:09 PM AEST
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first of all...all guys are jerks...or maybe they just turn into jerks once they've become your ex???

it's wonderful how you've put heartbreak into words...and it looks like your dealing with good-byes very well

- Bethani -




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