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Array ( [sid] => 6218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => One Single Drop [time] => 2002-11-05 03:00:00 [hometext] => One single drop is all it takes, after one comes another and so forth until there's no drops left. [bodytext] => I stand in a thousand thoughts,
of how to end my life.
To rid of the pain and confusion,
thats burning at my heart.
I cut through my soft skin,
a single drop of blood emerges.
It glistens sitting on my wrist,
before pelting to the ground.
In one quick movement,
I make the ultimate slice.
The one that ended my life.
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One Single Drop

Contributed by hollie85 on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I stand in a thousand thoughts,
of how to end my life.
To rid of the pain and confusion,
thats burning at my heart.
I cut through my soft skin,
a single drop of blood emerges.
It glistens sitting on my wrist,
before pelting to the ground.
In one quick movement,
I make the ultimate slice.
The one that ended my life.

Copyright Â© hollie85 ... [ 2002-11-05 03:00:00]
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Re: One Single Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:03:15 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC hollie
I can relate to this all to well
Great write, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: One Single Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by horseluver on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:16:05 PM AEST
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wow-this is really graphic -has a lot of emotion-please keep writing and I hope you don't feel the pain expressed in this poem. Stay Strong...XXOO...~Jess

Re: One Single Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by shepdog1972 on Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:38:18 PM AEST
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I just want to say that i hope that it will not ever have to come to this....so many times we look at all the pain in our lives and redigest all the bad times.... we can spend our time alone redigesting past regretts or we can come to terms and realize that we are the only ones who can forgive ourselves...it makes much more sense to live in the pressent tense.....
thanks for sharing
john

Re: One Single Drop (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:30:36 AM AEST
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yeah, i remember te day i died but it wasn't from cutting it was from taking all the crap that was clogging me up!
how-ever, away from me and back on to your poem.
it's excellent!
5 stars.

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