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Array ( [sid] => 62121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Clowns of Confusion live [time] => 2004-08-31 22:37:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm bleeding
I'm needing
to reach out
to touch you
I'm fading
I'm so cold
and thinking
It's all about you,
as the pain
bores deeper
rage is found
and it's beautiful.
Visions of you as you maim
vicious is the look
terror
is the game,
Clowns of confusion
bounce
you laugh
as we fall down
that was then
but
this is now.
In the
Village of the void
the underground
has awakened
sweetly bleeding
forgotten
and forsakened,
Clowns of confusion
bounce
bounce
bounce
we live!!!
ha ha ha
we live!!!
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 60 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )
Clowns of Confusion live

Contributed by secretwind on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac



I'm bleeding
I'm needing
to reach out
to touch you
I'm fading
I'm so cold
and thinking
It's all about you,
as the pain
bores deeper
rage is found
and it's beautiful.
Visions of you as you maim
vicious is the look
terror
is the game,
Clowns of confusion
bounce
you laugh
as we fall down
that was then
but
this is now.
In the
Village of the void
the underground
has awakened
sweetly bleeding
forgotten
and forsakened,
Clowns of confusion
bounce
bounce
bounce
we live!!!
ha ha ha
we live!!!




Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-08-31 22:37:51]
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Re: Clowns of Confusion live (User Rating: 1 )
by pyrofairyburning on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:49:36 PM AEST
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Pretty damn good. I liked it.


Re: Clowns of Confusion live (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:04:33 AM AEST
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bRILLIANT, I LOVE IT!


Re: Clowns of Confusion live (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:47:30 AM AEST
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well that was different, I really liked it :)

pixie xx


Re: Clowns of Confusion live (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:36:18 AM AEST
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Secretwind, this reminded me of the Bring in the Clowns.......Life is so confusion at times, and your'e so right can be completely futile!
This was a very different poem, and showed much planning on your part. Carefully chosen words, that tore me apart!
Hugs
consue


Re: Clowns of Confusion live (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:45:03 PM AEST
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One hardly knows how to react to this one.
but we still live and as long as there's breathe there's hope.
Keep the faith luv.
Life's like a box of chocalet, one never knows wat cha gonna get.
Forrest gump says his momma says that but I luv it no matter who said it as it's magical and lets one find hope for the new day.
Great writing but like mom, (lovingcritters )said it rips my heart out.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
mucho luv!


Re: Clowns of Confusion live (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:15:33 PM AEST
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hehehe! clowns! that was very cool. I love your stuff.




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