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Array ( [sid] => 62110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Annoyances [time] => 2004-08-31 21:12:53 [hometext] => I know, my rythm sucks, and it doesn't all fit, but read on, and comment on anything else i did wrong. [bodytext] => Clicks of pens, ringing of bells
Sounds of school, Annoyances
Mostly sounds but sometimes smells

All of these things irritate me
They make my blood boil
Some even make me sneeze

All of these annoyances hurt my head
A headache is coming
I wish I were back in bed

I can feel my blood pressure rising
My temple throbs out of my head
Everything’s annoying

I wish I wasn’t here
If I could go back to bed
I’d cut off my own ear

The essence of this dreadful place
Creeps up my spine
It suffocates my very brain
Like a tree surrounded by a vine

If only I could stop these things
Stop everything around
If only I could make my feet
Lift slowly off the ground
I would fly away from here
Leaving everything behind
All of my annoyances
Would slowly leave my mind

After I finally graduate
I might regret this poem
But now I only want to get
So far away from home
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 6 [informant] => mcloysoccer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Annoyances

Contributed by mcloysoccer on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Clicks of pens, ringing of bells
Sounds of school, Annoyances
Mostly sounds but sometimes smells

All of these things irritate me
They make my blood boil
Some even make me sneeze

All of these annoyances hurt my head
A headache is coming
I wish I were back in bed

I can feel my blood pressure rising
My temple throbs out of my head
Everything’s annoying

I wish I wasn’t here
If I could go back to bed
I’d cut off my own ear

The essence of this dreadful place
Creeps up my spine
It suffocates my very brain
Like a tree surrounded by a vine

If only I could stop these things
Stop everything around
If only I could make my feet
Lift slowly off the ground
I would fly away from here
Leaving everything behind
All of my annoyances
Would slowly leave my mind

After I finally graduate
I might regret this poem
But now I only want to get
So far away from home




Copyright © mcloysoccer ... [ 2004-08-31 21:12:53]
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Re: Annoyances (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST
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I can identify with this..but from a Teacher's point of view!! lol
I enjoyed this, thank you...
Jenni


Re: Annoyances (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:33:08 PM AEST
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Nothing wrong with this poem. It's great. Although it conjured up memories of my very own (not so recent), school days.....thanks ever so much. :P

Good writing!!!

~Breezy


Re: Annoyances (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:31:35 PM AEST
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well let me see the top things that annoy me about school 1) the pointlessness of the things to learn 2) the people there 3) the school rules that i cannot make those annoying people shut up! =] i liked your write also, it brings back all these bad memories that i will live through again tomorrow.




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