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Where the devil has come close to winning the race.
A grief that someone feels of total hopelessness.
No matter what direction I go towards, there is no solution
There is only emptiness in my soul that I cannot grasp on to.
The flicker of hope is getting smaller and smaller
The little hope I’ve had is diminishing.
I’m trying to hold on but everything around me is so dismal.
Everything is tumbling down
and there seems to be no way to construct it back up again.
I have always had a linger of hope, but today I sit in darkness.
I can’t take the humiliation anymore.
There seems to be nothing else for me to reach for.
I have created my own hell and I doubt there is a way out of the fire.
This is the path I have walked into.
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This is my Hell

Contributed by solnubis on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:58:33 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Is this how you feel when the end is close by
Where the devil has come close to winning the race.
A grief that someone feels of total hopelessness.
No matter what direction I go towards, there is no solution
There is only emptiness in my soul that I cannot grasp on to.
The flicker of hope is getting smaller and smaller
The little hope I’ve had is diminishing.
I’m trying to hold on but everything around me is so dismal.
Everything is tumbling down
and there seems to be no way to construct it back up again.
I have always had a linger of hope, but today I sit in darkness.
I can’t take the humiliation anymore.
There seems to be nothing else for me to reach for.
I have created my own hell and I doubt there is a way out of the fire.
This is the path I have walked into.

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Re: This is my Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 10:26:37 PM AEST
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Hey! I know this feeling. You are not alone. Good write. Very descriptive. Peace to you.
Thumps ; 0)

Re: This is my Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by MsScissors on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:57:49 AM AEST
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I had a day like this...yesterday. Then I talked to my mom. she said to ease up on myself. if you hold onto the fire too tight you really will snuff it. Let that emptiness go. you have a right to be happy.

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