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to a place of possibility
And in my mind I find
I can escape my own humility.

The fire and magic of a first kiss
I willingly remember
And my heart knows, before my mouth speaks,
already planning my surrender. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 40 [informant] => girltranscended [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Taken

Contributed by girltranscended on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:04:47 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

At first glance I am taken
to a place of possibility
And in my mind I find
I can escape my own humility.

The fire and magic of a first kiss
I willingly remember
And my heart knows, before my mouth speaks,
already planning my surrender.

Copyright © girltranscended ... [ 2004-08-31 17:04:47]
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Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:34:21 PM AEST
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short, sweet, and beautiful. nicley done!
~brynna~

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:08:52 PM AEST
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meh, passion is passion... so worth the risk. this is nice, i like it!!
~Remy~

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 08:29:44 PM AEST
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You've captured those first few moments of attraction and passion remarkably well for so few words.
And yes the pleasure of surrender...or too soon surrender is risky, but....
well done!

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by WildfireRose on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:30:16 AM AEST
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aww that was cute, good job!

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:29:06 AM AEST
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Ohhhhh GT - I like this!!!!! I don't know how you managed it - but you've put into eight lines what would have taken me a couple dozen lines to express (that's assuming, I could manage to express it!). This is fabulous!

And by the way... I don't think you ever really forget. Thank goodness!
SNM

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by TheManagement on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:59:24 PM AEST
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i like it. keep it up! ^-^

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by TedHuggableBare on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:38:18 PM AEST
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Taken is how the heart reacts to that crazy little thing called love (and even lust). I loved your poem.

Re: Taken (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:50:04 AM AEST
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Risky is putting it mildly. I'd love to do a study of people who get into cars shortly after experiencing a first kiss. I think the accident numbers might tell us something. Sometimes I wonder if love is an excuse to get stupid. Well, this one certainly got me thinking. Thanks for sharing.
Stitch

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