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Array ( [sid] => 62065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night Mares [time] => 2004-08-31 15:22:26 [hometext] => Another found treasure from the past, I think this was written in highschool ( Damn, I feel old ) [bodytext] => ( one of the first songs I wrote )



Long dark legs
Jet black hair
When I close my eyes
I see them everywhere

Flaming hooves
Fiery eyes
Leaping from the shadows
To the midnight skies

WAKE UP !!
Don't go to sleep
Don't you know they're waiting for you
In your dreams
One breath
Is all it takes
You might lose your soul to them
Before you wake

Try to run
Cant get away
Got to stay ahead
Untill the break of day

Don't look back
Here they come
Hoofbeats like the beating
Of a giant drum

WAKE UP !!
Don't go to sleep
Don't you know they're waiting for you
In your dreams
One breath
Is all it takes
You might lose your soul to them
Before you wake

You can run
But you can't hide
Where can you go
Escape your mind
( your mind )
( your mind )
( your mind )
( you're mine)

WAKE UP !!
Don't go to sleep
Don't you know they're waiting for you
In your dreams
One breath
Is all it takes
You might lose your soul to them
Before you wake

( music fades to a receding galop of hooves )


( Naz shrugs ~ what can I say, I was young ) [comments] => 8 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Nazmythian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Night Mares

Contributed by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



( one of the first songs I wrote )



Long dark legs
Jet black hair
When I close my eyes
I see them everywhere

Flaming hooves
Fiery eyes
Leaping from the shadows
To the midnight skies

WAKE UP !!
Don't go to sleep
Don't you know they're waiting for you
In your dreams
One breath
Is all it takes
You might lose your soul to them
Before you wake

Try to run
Cant get away
Got to stay ahead
Untill the break of day

Don't look back
Here they come
Hoofbeats like the beating
Of a giant drum

WAKE UP !!
Don't go to sleep
Don't you know they're waiting for you
In your dreams
One breath
Is all it takes
You might lose your soul to them
Before you wake

You can run
But you can't hide
Where can you go
Escape your mind
( your mind )
( your mind )
( your mind )
( you're mine)

WAKE UP !!
Don't go to sleep
Don't you know they're waiting for you
In your dreams
One breath
Is all it takes
You might lose your soul to them
Before you wake

( music fades to a receding galop of hooves )


( Naz shrugs ~ what can I say, I was young )




Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2004-08-31 15:22:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:59:37 PM AEST
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wow! i think this is excellent!!!!!
i get night mares too. i can relate to you loads.
this is awesome!!!


Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:14:08 PM AEST
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Exceptionally enchanting! Another masterpiece created, mon ami! Exellent! Chilling, and yet seductive. But I understand your unsatiable desires, sweet Naz. For I have them also. We all do. You have expressed your feelings eloquently and beautifully! I like this piece! Age only makes you wiser, dear friend! Youth shall never fade away! I am glad you have found this work!! Creative, different, and beguiling! I loved it! All those wonderful things meshed into one exhilirating ride! Dearest Naz, you have done it again! Great poet, I will keep on my journey through your exquisite soul, hoping to finally see the core of your being... Thank you for sharing this stunning piece! As always, all my love and blessings to you and the family! Forever,

Your devoted fan and friend!
Fleur


Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:29:43 PM AEST
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I like it......some Zeppelin background......ooppss dated my self huh.....

Very good write, thanks for sharing.


Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:01:28 PM AEST
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glad you kept it....
love the style
creative
thanks for posting it


cheers!


Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:21:33 PM AEST
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this is fuggin' awsome!


Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:02:06 PM AEST
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Impressive, especially considering that you were quite young at the time. So it appears that you write music also. Multi talented.

Your words are so descriptive and powerful
Willofree



Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:33:59 AM AEST
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excellent, I wake to the pounding of hooves sometimes, but they are real, just Gypsie feeling her oats. Very good song.


Re: Night Mares (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:00:20 AM AEST
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Well Naz, I personally liked it. We all have to start somewhere......high school or not!
Great write
Hugs
consue




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