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Array ( [sid] => 62042 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pen to paper and my heart is unfastened [time] => 2004-08-31 11:07:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Shes gone astray to me now

The love we fabricated

Exhausted in a matter of weeks

Days hours time

The first of your kind

You left me broken and bruised

Bitterness

No thats just not my style

Detachment Infidelity Reluctances

Effort never a difficulty on my fraction

Technology a instant of convenience discarded

Our moves were adjacent distance not relevant

Trust you speak

How bout abandonment

All become high merit for you

Controlling?

Just an excuse for your fallacies

At first I held on

A door half shut

A windowless room

I would tear thru the wall

As time fades

So does the memories

The smiles we shared

Smile to frown

You have altered

To me you are

The moment after the last breath

For the drowning victim

The bullet lying next to

The maddened man

After passing thru him

The rope around my neck

Is where you are left

Dead to me

A new person was born

One I wish to not know

Nor understand

Think of yourself good riddance

Think of yourself good riddance

Think of yourself good riddance

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Pen to paper and my heart is unfastened

Contributed by kojikeneda on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:07:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Shes gone astray to me now

The love we fabricated

Exhausted in a matter of weeks

Days hours time

The first of your kind

You left me broken and bruised

Bitterness

No thats just not my style

Detachment Infidelity Reluctances

Effort never a difficulty on my fraction

Technology a instant of convenience discarded

Our moves were adjacent distance not relevant

Trust you speak

How bout abandonment

All become high merit for you

Controlling?

Just an excuse for your fallacies

At first I held on

A door half shut

A windowless room

I would tear thru the wall

As time fades

So does the memories

The smiles we shared

Smile to frown

You have altered

To me you are

The moment after the last breath

For the drowning victim

The bullet lying next to

The maddened man

After passing thru him

The rope around my neck

Is where you are left

Dead to me

A new person was born

One I wish to not know

Nor understand

Think of yourself good riddance

Think of yourself good riddance

Think of yourself good riddance





Copyright © kojikeneda ... [ 2004-08-31 11:07:29]
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Re: Pen to paper and my heart is unfastened (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:28:31 AM AEST
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a very touching and moving write,

pixie xx




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