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Array ( [sid] => 61993 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Recovering Death [time] => 2004-08-30 22:17:19 [hometext] => this poem is when you pick yourself up from nothing, when something hurts you so much and knocks you onto the floor you pick yourself up, you recover from what you think at that moment is the end of you. [bodytext] => spear of darkness
piercing me.
bleeding life
through my wound
i grab a cloth
to soak it up
but it slowly vanished.
iam free at last
i feel the freedom
i feel the release
of all that holded me down
now i can see
iam alive
i breath
slowly taking air inside
i breath
i cry
for i realize
iam alive,
one more time.
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Recovering Death

Contributed by silverjade on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

spear of darkness
piercing me.
bleeding life
through my wound
i grab a cloth
to soak it up
but it slowly vanished.
iam free at last
i feel the freedom
i feel the release
of all that holded me down
now i can see
iam alive
i breath
slowly taking air inside
i breath
i cry
for i realize
iam alive,
one more time.

Copyright © silverjade ... [ 2004-08-30 22:17:19]
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Re: Recovering Death (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:58:27 PM AEST
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sweet poem,i can relate,u should check out some of my stuff,not sure u'll like it but hey its worth a try right?
well later

savedbydeath

Re: Recovering Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:02:55 PM AEST
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They keep saying "what doesn't kill us will make us stronger". I think I am finally believing that. We just have trust in our own strength and viability. This is a great write.

Rita

Re: Recovering Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST
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Good poem. Reminds me of my bad car wreck 6 months ago. i have the wound i'll have the rest of my life but i'am thankful for being here and being able to respond to this poem nice..
Willie

Re: Recovering Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:39:21 AM AEST
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awesome

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