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Array ( [sid] => 61988 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Addiction [time] => 2004-08-30 21:56:09 [hometext] => this, like many other things i have written, came randomly from no where.. but its basically about my love for sexual relations. [bodytext] => your words are venom
your pretty little lies
make me believe your words
help me to be alive

feeling dull inside
feeling dull inside
do you know what it means to die?

whisper your words in my ear yet again
make me shudder
make me feel my dear friend
your words are venom
my poison, my end

make me feel
make me feel
make me feel yet again

whisper your words on my lips
down my neck and reach my fingertips
tell me you love me,
your pretty little lies
it's only your truths i truly despise

whisper your words so that i can fly
keep me alive
keep me alive

touch me, kiss me, feel me
im alive,
**** me, love me, tell me
all your lies
your words are venom
but they help me to fly [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 43 [informant] => CrimsonOrgazm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Addiction

Contributed by CrimsonOrgazm on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:56:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

your words are venom
your pretty little lies
make me believe your words
help me to be alive

feeling dull inside
feeling dull inside
do you know what it means to die?

whisper your words in my ear yet again
make me shudder
make me feel my dear friend
your words are venom
my poison, my end

make me feel
make me feel
make me feel yet again

whisper your words on my lips
down my neck and reach my fingertips
tell me you love me,
your pretty little lies
it's only your truths i truly despise

whisper your words so that i can fly
keep me alive
keep me alive

touch me, kiss me, feel me
im alive,
**** me, love me, tell me
all your lies
your words are venom
but they help me to fly

Copyright © CrimsonOrgazm ... [ 2004-08-30 21:56:09]
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Re: My Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:00:32 AM AEST
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Interesting use of contrast in your rhymes. The discomforture you show in them is refreshingly honest and makes for worthwhile reading.

I like your name, also - its certainly eye-catching, and your poetry (of what I've read so far) lives up to it.

Hoping you're coping with it - keep writing and welcome.

Re: My Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:20:28 AM AEST
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it's only your truths i truly despise......this rocks!!!!

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