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and say such poetic words
to melt your soul in with mine
but alas they go unheard

I wish that I could sing to you
or play your favorite tune
to lull you and make you stay with me
you always seem to leave to soon

I wish that I could paint you a world
perfect for you and me
with all your favorite things there
but my work you cannot see

I wish that you could see me
and all these things I do
i'm only trying to show
that I’m in love with you
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Unseen works

Contributed by holderofthestone on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I wish that I could hold you
and say such poetic words
to melt your soul in with mine
but alas they go unheard

I wish that I could sing to you
or play your favorite tune
to lull you and make you stay with me
you always seem to leave to soon

I wish that I could paint you a world
perfect for you and me
with all your favorite things there
but my work you cannot see

I wish that you could see me
and all these things I do
i'm only trying to show
that I’m in love with you

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2004-08-30 21:00:37]
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Re: Unseen works (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
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excellent write. this reminds me of one of the writes afterdark has written. some wishes come true, others do not for a reason =]

Re: Unseen works (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:34:17 PM AEST
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Holder this is very touching, warm, and sincere! I like the way you ended this poem, see me and all these things I do, I'm only trying to show that I'm in love with you!
How sweet!
Watch people and you can tell what they are
thinking........good or bad!
Liked this one very much
consue

Re: Unseen works (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:23:53 AM AEST
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wow holder this is sad, but very beautifully written, you laways throw so much emotion into your writes, and thats what makes them so special.

pixie xx

Re: Unseen works (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:15:34 PM AEST
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this is a lovely warm piece of writing although the person you write about shows neglect, the writer is so full of love its a joy to read.

Your ideas for the poems progression are brillent - painting a world for someone is a cool idea...

Re: Unseen works (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:28:37 PM AEST
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aw this was such a cute but very sad write...I hope she sees it too...and only if she feels teh same its always better that way...keep up the good work...

mcuh love,
Dani

Re: Unseen works (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 01:33:38 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written. I know how that feels oh so very well Great write

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