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Array ( [sid] => 61954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling in love with you [time] => 2004-08-30 18:52:38 [hometext] => This is a poem that I made this summer for my current crush when he was away for a month. [bodytext] => Time will only tell, just how far our story goes,
Will love ever develop, I don't think anyone knows,
We can beat the odds, suceed where others fail,
But please take care, my hearts still very frail,
I may not seem perfect, but I can be your everything,
I'll devote myself to you, I'll prove that I am something,
We can show others, what love really means,
The type of love people see, only in their dreams,
It seems like we just started, and now you've gone away,
But here I'll wait for you, this is where I'll stay,
I need you more than ever, I want to hold you in my arms,
I don't want to be alone anymore, I wan't to get away from their superficial charm,
You haunt me in my dreams, I awake thinking your not that far away,
But then I face reality, and realize that your not coming back for days,
Sometimes I look up at the moon, wondering what your thinking,
Into the dark sky of blackness, where the stars remain sinking,
Sudden breezes pass me by, sometimes I swear I can feel you there,
But I know that your not, your in the distance out there somewhere,
Maybe you think Im crazy, but I know this much is true,
Even though your not with me, John, Im falling in love with you...
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Falling in love with you

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 06:52:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Time will only tell, just how far our story goes,
Will love ever develop, I don't think anyone knows,
We can beat the odds, suceed where others fail,
But please take care, my hearts still very frail,
I may not seem perfect, but I can be your everything,
I'll devote myself to you, I'll prove that I am something,
We can show others, what love really means,
The type of love people see, only in their dreams,
It seems like we just started, and now you've gone away,
But here I'll wait for you, this is where I'll stay,
I need you more than ever, I want to hold you in my arms,
I don't want to be alone anymore, I wan't to get away from their superficial charm,
You haunt me in my dreams, I awake thinking your not that far away,
But then I face reality, and realize that your not coming back for days,
Sometimes I look up at the moon, wondering what your thinking,
Into the dark sky of blackness, where the stars remain sinking,
Sudden breezes pass me by, sometimes I swear I can feel you there,
But I know that your not, your in the distance out there somewhere,
Maybe you think Im crazy, but I know this much is true,
Even though your not with me, John, Im falling in love with you...




Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-08-30 18:52:38]
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Re: Falling in love with you (User Rating: 1 )
by gah_veh on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 05:03:49 PM AEST
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very nice poem i dont know why noone commented i guess noone has patience anymore, liked it alot keep up the good work




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