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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => A Bid Farewell
[time] => 2004-08-30 16:33:28
[hometext] => a bid farewell to all those on YPDC......
[bodytext] => I wanted to cry out in pain
but I held it in
I wanted to live
wanted to grin
But you said no
in the face of a lie
you said who cares
you wanted me to die
I will have to agree
it is time for me to be free
time for me to say goodbye
a time for me to leave
Before I go
I wish to tell you how I feel
sometimes I think
this just can't be real
I want you to understand
now as I'm draging the blade
that I hate you
and all of the mistakes you've made
all you care about is your own happiness
but what about mine
I can never be happy
I will never be fine
What will you do
when you find my mangled body
all covered in blood
will you be sorry
I want to DIE
I'll do it tonight
I'll take my last breath
I'm giving up on this fight
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 280
[topic] => 36
[informant] => screwup
[notes] =>
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
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A Bid Farewell
Contributed by
screwup
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:33:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wanted to cry out in pain
but I held it in
I wanted to live
wanted to grin
But you said no
in the face of a lie
you said who cares
you wanted me to die
I will have to agree
it is time for me to be free
time for me to say goodbye
a time for me to leave
Before I go
I wish to tell you how I feel
sometimes I think
this just can't be real
I want you to understand
now as I'm draging the blade
that I hate you
and all of the mistakes you've made
all you care about is your own happiness
but what about mine
I can never be happy
I will never be fine
What will you do
when you find my mangled body
all covered in blood
will you be sorry
I want to DIE
I'll do it tonight
I'll take my last breath
I'm giving up on this fight
Copyright ©
screwup
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2004-08-30 16:33:28]
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by arden on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:43:47 PM AEST
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this was very deep and powerful.
i know what your feeling, i have these same feelings and thoughts all the time.
but there is still alot to live for. youve got to go through the bad in life until you get to the good.
a very good/ touching poem. great work.
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:47:49 PM AEST
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I know how you feel......but the truth of it all.....when they find a body.........no pity or remorse do they feel.......they hate us more or just say oh well......so think again.......someone down the line who is living in pain might be the one who searched and searched for you ....but then you were gone.
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:52:06 PM AEST
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oh please don't do it!
if you want i'll be here, just PM me.
people on here care about you!
i can't stop you, but i can say how much people care about you on here... and PLEASE DON'T DO IT!!!
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by pixie on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:54:46 PM AEST
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like Arden I too have these feeling alot *hugs* if you are writing/talking about this then that is a good sign, write everything sown in poem as you feel it, we are here for you, all you need do is ask *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by shelby on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:30:49 PM AEST
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Im gonna be hard on you for a moment.
Before you kill yourself stop and think of the harm you will do to those left behind and you will do harm that will hurt and haunt forever believe me.
Life is full of hard times we all have them and I understand completly how your feeling BUT.......
dont give up on yourself its not life your giving up on but YOU pick yourself up in the best way you know how and reach out for things you want
take a deep breath and LIVE not easy but try it you may be surprised how many people really do care about you. Your choice I hope you make the right one.Be easy on yourself.
Michelle |
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by Sweetheart on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:52:41 PM AEST
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| I don't know you personally, but I do know that everyone is put on earth for a reason. God has a set time for you to go, don't take matters into your own hands and take your own life. Everyone has a hard time, I myself know this because of a cronic disease i have.Many people don't get a choice to live or die, but you have that choice. There are millions who would want to live. Eventhough you don't feel like going on, in the end if you pull through it will show how strong you really are and will make you able to face anything.Good luck, and I hope you things will work out okay. God bless. |
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by Willofree on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 06:57:30 PM AEST
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I don't know you personally, but I know you as one brother and sister in Christ. Suicide is a permanent ending to what would have been a temporary problem. Happiness is not the abscence of problems, but our ability to live with our problems. If we are willing to contemplate suicide over someone else, that is a low self-esteem issue. That would suggest that the real underlying problem is caring more about yourself; and realizing no
one else is worth killing yourself over. Crist created you as a special labor of love, a precious commodity, don't destroy it (you)!
God Bless and I pray you choose life
Willofree |
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Re: A Bid Farewell
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by tifrob on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 08:08:19 PM AEST
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You have a lot of people on here at YPDC that want to be your friend. Give them and yourself that chance. You deserve that... Give it a chance... Friends come from all walks of life... Good Luck!
J~ |
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