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Array ( [sid] => 6190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Look Who's Talking [time] => 2002-11-04 14:30:00 [hometext] => well this is my reply to Opium's poem "once" it's more like what's called "duo" but in poetry :) [bodytext] => I stood you nagging for years and years
i had to carry all of your tears
i was there for you , i slept by your side
you were killing me man holding me that tight

You kissed me, we played when happy,whereas
when you had a bad date you kicked my a**
i don't understand i'm just a toy
left in the hands of a Moody bad boy

Day after day i ended under bed
why you bought me!?i wish you never had!
you found me there,old ,dirty and crashed
you bought another one and threw me in the trash

See my friends what i have to bear
just because im a little Teddy Bear [comments] => 4 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 43 [informant] => gina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Look Who's Talking

Contributed by gina on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I stood you nagging for years and years
i had to carry all of your tears
i was there for you , i slept by your side
you were killing me man holding me that tight

You kissed me, we played when happy,whereas
when you had a bad date you kicked my a**
i don't understand i'm just a toy
left in the hands of a Moody bad boy

Day after day i ended under bed
why you bought me!?i wish you never had!
you found me there,old ,dirty and crashed
you bought another one and threw me in the trash

See my friends what i have to bear
just because im a little Teddy Bear

Copyright © gina ... [ 2002-11-04 14:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Look Who's Talking (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 06:21:48 PM AEST
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Clever.:)

Re: Look Who's Talking (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:57:31 PM AEST
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This was really good I could feel your anger in this! I hope things work oit for you! Christina

Re: Look Who's Talking (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:07:12 AM AEST
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Ha Ha Ha ... very smart ...very smart

Re: Look Who's Talking (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 02:43:06 PM AEST
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That was very good and yet so clever indeed. That was lovely and it was different. I really enjoyed that. Wonderful write. So talented.

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