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Array ( [sid] => 61842 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Screaming [time] => 2004-08-29 20:20:21 [hometext] => this poem came from great pain...maybe too much for me too handle. it would mean ALOT to me if you read and comment. Thank You [bodytext] => I cut to bleed
I cut because you can't see
how much it hurts,
you giving up on me

stabbed me square in the heart
not sure what drug us apart
only one who was there
now in my heart one more tear

I'm calling you out
I'm screaming for blood
because I am stuck in the mud
I hate you

you want me to die
I'll gladly release you of your misery
tell me how to do it, you always did
you only wanted my body

you never loved me
you never will
now I think you've had your fill
saying goodbye isn't hard anymore

I am alone now, sitting in my room
the new blood making me swoon
I am cutting in the face of you
I am screaming and hope you are too. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 36 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Screaming

Contributed by screwup on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I cut to bleed
I cut because you can't see
how much it hurts,
you giving up on me

stabbed me square in the heart
not sure what drug us apart
only one who was there
now in my heart one more tear

I'm calling you out
I'm screaming for blood
because I am stuck in the mud
I hate you

you want me to die
I'll gladly release you of your misery
tell me how to do it, you always did
you only wanted my body

you never loved me
you never will
now I think you've had your fill
saying goodbye isn't hard anymore

I am alone now, sitting in my room
the new blood making me swoon
I am cutting in the face of you
I am screaming and hope you are too.

Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-08-29 20:20:21]
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Re: Screaming (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:30:19 PM AEST
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awsome poem! it just screams anger!!
i can almost see you sitting on you bed cutting up your face and arms!
great poem, i really enjoyed it!
by the way, have a look at mine, What Went Wrong, its right above yers!
keep it up!

Tweek

Re: Screaming (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:42:20 PM AEST
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>>>>>I can almost see you sitting on you bed cutting up your face and arms!
great poem, i really enjoyed it!

I have quoted a part of Tweeks comment to your poem, amnd was quite annoyed as the contents of it, this poem to me tells me that the person who wrote it is in great emotional pain, how can another person really enjoy a write about that????

I didnt enjoy it, i seen a person who is crying out for help in her writes.. a very powerful and emotional write Screwup

pixie xx

Re: Screaming (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:15:10 PM AEST
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very dark and angry, im so sorry you were used like this, no one deserves that. i know how you feel, anyway beautiful write, if you ever wanna talk, IM me.
lovelovelovelove, Brynna

Re: Screaming (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 12:32:16 AM AEST
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Sheesh all this cutting and screaming.
whats with that?
You need to seek help and please don't cut yourself.it's a very emotional write.good job.

Re: Screaming (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:32:04 AM AEST
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you've expressed your-self spactularly, (if that's the spelling lol), any ways, you've got a nice style.
i'm sorry about you're pain. i've experianced it too... only with me, i just hid and cried for years... and kept it all a secret until the time that i really blew and then EVERY THING that happened next change my life for-ever! and now often when things go wrong, i cut and screem!
i don't know how a like i'm to you, but i certanly feel your pain!!

... and also, i love the way you've written this.

Re: Screaming (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:02:45 AM AEST
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I don't usually do this... but thank you everyone who has posted comments...it means so much to get feedback from you all.
Especially you, Deathdrop... I feel like you understand me.

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