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Array ( [sid] => 61836 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vampyric thoughts... [time] => 2004-08-29 19:02:12 [hometext] => I think the title speaks for itself... I don't think this is one of my best poems, but we are our worst critics, lol... o well, enjoy everyone! Comments very appreciated! Thank you!! [bodytext] => Precious Night,
My dark Mother,
Bearer of a million children that light up your skies…
Watching me, always watching,
As I slowly take the life out of my prey…
This unbearable hunger that I have,
Churning, rupturing inside of me…
My only source of living,
This magical liquid…
The most beautiful shade of red,
Such an enchanting color…
Beguiling, heavenly, euphoric…
Like fire, this liquid that courses through my lifeless body…
I am soulless…
I am darkness…
I am your death…
Your eyes gaze into mine,
And you are under my resolute control…
Look deep into my eyes,
Try to find an essence,
A heart that beats…
There is nothing,
Except the incessant echo of Nothingness…
Fear consumes you,
As I seize you in my iron grip…
Your graceful neck is revealed,
And the monster inside surfaces…
My canine teeth sink ravenously into your supple neck,
Draining the life out of your pathetic body…
You are mine now,
My slave for eternity…
Your life now is with the darkness,
A creature with a soul,
A monster with a conscience…
Feeling the merciless stab of Guilt and Regret…
I am your Hell,
Your Death and your Rebirth…


Death is only the beginning....
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Vampyric thoughts...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:02:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Precious Night,
My dark Mother,
Bearer of a million children that light up your skies…
Watching me, always watching,
As I slowly take the life out of my prey…
This unbearable hunger that I have,
Churning, rupturing inside of me…
My only source of living,
This magical liquid…
The most beautiful shade of red,
Such an enchanting color…
Beguiling, heavenly, euphoric…
Like fire, this liquid that courses through my lifeless body…
I am soulless…
I am darkness…
I am your death…
Your eyes gaze into mine,
And you are under my resolute control…
Look deep into my eyes,
Try to find an essence,
A heart that beats…
There is nothing,
Except the incessant echo of Nothingness…
Fear consumes you,
As I seize you in my iron grip…
Your graceful neck is revealed,
And the monster inside surfaces…
My canine teeth sink ravenously into your supple neck,
Draining the life out of your pathetic body…
You are mine now,
My slave for eternity…
Your life now is with the darkness,
A creature with a soul,
A monster with a conscience…
Feeling the merciless stab of Guilt and Regret…
I am your Hell,
Your Death and your Rebirth…


Death is only the beginning....




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Re: Vampyric thoughts... (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:55:02 PM AEST
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We r are own worse critics...I know this to well.But
I did like it to..Good read..

AfterDark..


Re: Vampyric thoughts... (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:48:32 PM AEST
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It's dark very dark.
but written very well.
I like it.


Re: Vampyric thoughts... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:00:40 PM AEST
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Your words never fail to entrance me, I even caught myself, head listing just to the left, rolling back ever so slightly to accomodate your "Kiss". I am unable to combat your "resolute control". Surrender, voices whisper, echoing through the empty puppet I have become ....

Wait, where was I ... oh yes, another superb write, my dear.

Nazmythian ~




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