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Array ( [sid] => 61819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request [time] => 2004-08-29 15:19:51 [hometext] => Please comment. [bodytext] => Mother dearest hold him close
Protect him from this world of cruel cruel hate
Guide him so he wont have a failure's fate
Help him be what he always wanted to be

Father dearest come teach him please
Teach him to take charge, be realiable, responisible
Teach him to take risks the, childhood gamble
The gamble to ask a girl if she likes him or not

Mother Dearest please stop hurting him
I guess you beating him is his life's fee
He hasnt hurt you for he's just so young
A baby knowing, only of this pain

Father dearest where have you been
No one has seen you, you with another womin I can see
Neglect your son and beat your wife
I guess thats why she dominates your babies life

I feel sorry for him he follows my path
Hopfully strong enough to keep his life
As I watch this helpless baby Ill be by his side
For gone down the same path now a ghost to watch his side [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 13 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Mother dearest hold him close
Protect him from this world of cruel cruel hate
Guide him so he wont have a failure's fate
Help him be what he always wanted to be

Father dearest come teach him please
Teach him to take charge, be realiable, responisible
Teach him to take risks the, childhood gamble
The gamble to ask a girl if she likes him or not

Mother Dearest please stop hurting him
I guess you beating him is his life's fee
He hasnt hurt you for he's just so young
A baby knowing, only of this pain

Father dearest where have you been
No one has seen you, you with another womin I can see
Neglect your son and beat your wife
I guess thats why she dominates your babies life

I feel sorry for him he follows my path
Hopfully strong enough to keep his life
As I watch this helpless baby Ill be by his side
For gone down the same path now a ghost to watch his side




Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-08-29 15:19:51]
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Re: Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:10:17 PM AEST
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This was very good..Sad but very good..

AfterDark..


Re: Mommy Daddy My Ghostly Request (User Rating: 1 )
by longforgottenlove on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:14:03 PM AEST
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daric that poem was wonderfully written it almost made me cry and thats not easy

much love,
april rose




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