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And yet I keep coming back to you

Well if this is wrong
How is it supposed to be
I'm caught up in what appears to be a dream
Or something of a fantasy

It's short of everything
Real and true
I move with my emotions
Now feeling for two

My whole world melts
When I steal your gaze
My heart skips a beat
That goes on for days

My head spins swiftly
As my knees turn soft and weak
You've left me utterly speechless
With so much left to speak
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Speechless (revised)

Contributed by stellar on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:25:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It all seems too good to be true
And yet I keep coming back to you

Well if this is wrong
How is it supposed to be
I'm caught up in what appears to be a dream
Or something of a fantasy

It's short of everything
Real and true
I move with my emotions
Now feeling for two

My whole world melts
When I steal your gaze
My heart skips a beat
That goes on for days

My head spins swiftly
As my knees turn soft and weak
You've left me utterly speechless
With so much left to speak

Copyright © stellar ... [ 2004-08-29 00:25:09]
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Re: Speechless (revised) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:00:00 AM AEST
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`Very good work of art as it shows jus some of the amazing power of the pen.
I'm always in awe of the power of the written word. We'll never run out of words or ways to use them, heck we can even make up our own words.
O cam certainly relate to this masterpeice in many ways.
luv, huggs, smiles, wonder?,
emy

Re: Speechless (revised) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:59:38 AM AEST
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great write,

pixie xx

Re: Speechless (revised) (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:06:54 AM AEST
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hmmmmm reminds me that I've been there done that... you've captured it well

Jordan oxo

Re: Speechless (revised) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:45:53 PM AEST
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Love is amazing. It can make you life so wonderful or destroy it if you let it. It is kind of one of those Catch-22 situations at times. Great writing.

Rita

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