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Cutting and bleeding
Living without reason
Purpose nonexistent
Your life is meaningless

The beautiful end
Of this beginning
All from travesty
Couldn't transcend
Torn and not mended
From life's credence

In the last moment
You try to forget
What it is to be meant
From all of this
Scars revealed on your skin
Your eyes show no feeling
As you see within

The beautiful end
About to commence
Your last wish
Is being fulfilled
With you bleeding
Without feeling
You leave this world
For forever more
There was no reason
To live anymore
The last moment
Lived through
With purpose
For once [comments] => 6 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Beautiful End

Contributed by Essentially9 on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The Beautiful End

Cutting and bleeding
Living without reason
Purpose nonexistent
Your life is meaningless

The beautiful end
Of this beginning
All from travesty
Couldn't transcend
Torn and not mended
From life's credence

In the last moment
You try to forget
What it is to be meant
From all of this
Scars revealed on your skin
Your eyes show no feeling
As you see within

The beautiful end
About to commence
Your last wish
Is being fulfilled
With you bleeding
Without feeling
You leave this world
For forever more
There was no reason
To live anymore
The last moment
Lived through
With purpose
For once

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-08-28 22:34:18]
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Re: The Beautiful End (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:43:49 PM AEST
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Deep dark and well done....

Re: The Beautiful End (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:32:12 AM AEST
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Like a dam broken, this poem poured forth plenty of emotions, very dark and vivid.
Beautifully written.

Take Care Always

Kindragon

Re: The Beautiful End (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:02:14 AM AEST
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this is stright from the heart, honest, very deep and filld with emotion,

pixie xx

great work...

Re: The Beautiful End (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:46:30 AM AEST
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very sad......... beautifully moving.......... do keep 'em coming, *wink* hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Beautiful End (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:07:53 PM AEST
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wow,what a dark write!but no worries it was SWEET as well,u do such a womderful job when it comes to ur poetry,which i'm very much proud of u for,keep up the incredible work...later babe!!!LOL

savedbydeath

Re: The Beautiful End (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:20:29 AM AEST
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very well wrote... nice job

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