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Array ( [sid] => 6175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => 11:11 [time] => 2002-11-04 07:30:00 [hometext] => this is about my boyfriend's ex-girlfriend, and how i feel whenever he talks about her. they went out for almost 2 years just before me and him started going out. she bothers me more than poetry can tell you. [bodytext] => it's 11:11 should i make another wish?
for you to forget her name,
for you to forget her face?
when you talk about her
i can't stand it
did you love her just as much?

it's 11:11 and i'll try once again
to wipe her away
from your mind, from your heart
is it wrong to be so hateful
towards someone you've never met?
she took something away
that can never be taken back

it's 11:11 and i'm making this wish
that i will have you forever
'cause that's one thing she never gets
you'll be with me and not her
and it's enough to make me forget
all the pain that she's caused me
and the jealousy i have [comments] => 2 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Haligh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

11:11

Contributed by Haligh on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

it's 11:11 should i make another wish?
for you to forget her name,
for you to forget her face?
when you talk about her
i can't stand it
did you love her just as much?

it's 11:11 and i'll try once again
to wipe her away
from your mind, from your heart
is it wrong to be so hateful
towards someone you've never met?
she took something away
that can never be taken back

it's 11:11 and i'm making this wish
that i will have you forever
'cause that's one thing she never gets
you'll be with me and not her
and it's enough to make me forget
all the pain that she's caused me
and the jealousy i have

Copyright © Haligh ... [ 2002-11-04 07:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: 11:11 (User Rating: 1 )
by Bitterkel on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 08:15:27 AM AEST
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I know how you feel, my boyfriend talks about this girl a lot and teases me with her, I dont know if he is trying to make me jealous or what....just know it gets on my nerves
BitterKel
PS: Great Poem!

Re: 11:11 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:01:56 PM AEST
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this is so familar from my past! Men who are not yet over the other will do this,even though it's rude they feel they need to talk about them!
I strickly told someone one day who did this to me,"You have me if you want me,you dont have her,so if shes who you are looking for in a women than look again,Because I will never be nore I'd want to be her ever!
If its me you want & keep than Quit speaking of her & your past! I'll find someone who wants ME, for who I am!Christina

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