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Alone with every one around you
Do you ever fill just like the air?
People all around you, its like your not there

All you can think of is the pain your in
Trying to cope with day-to-day life
Trying to please your friends your boss even your wife

Every wonder why that I dont act the same
Its not life its the pain it brings
You try so hard just to cope, sometimes you just lose hope

Then you have a good day and you start to think
Is this the turning point or just a bad prank?

Well it does not matter you just have to try your best
Trust in god that he will be there to help you through
He is the only one that knows what to do
Goofyone
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alone

Contributed by goofyone on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:08:54 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Alone
Alone with every one around you
Do you ever fill just like the air?
People all around you, its like your not there

All you can think of is the pain your in
Trying to cope with day-to-day life
Trying to please your friends your boss even your wife

Every wonder why that I dont act the same
Its not life its the pain it brings
You try so hard just to cope, sometimes you just lose hope

Then you have a good day and you start to think
Is this the turning point or just a bad prank?

Well it does not matter you just have to try your best
Trust in god that he will be there to help you through
He is the only one that knows what to do
Goofyone

Copyright © goofyone ... [ 2004-08-28 20:08:54]
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Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:15:05 PM AEST
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very good write even though i do not agree with the concept of God behind it. keep up the good work.

Re: alone (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 01:10:56 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one... yes... u have to trust in God b/c He is the only one to pull u thru... but He lets u go thru all this stuff... so that u will depend on Him more and more... ppl can't seem to understand that concept...
Great write... keep it up!
~Donna~

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