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Array ( [sid] => 61613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Farewell - you will be loved [time] => 2004-08-27 19:01:28 [hometext] => dedicated to one of my favourite teachers going away... [bodytext] => Why is it, that you have to go?
there are greater things we owe
A full thanks for your love
you will always be our beloved

For all the things we needed to know,
to us you have showed
We wish you could stay
just for one more day

We know you're going to a greater place
where you will be welcomed and embraced
we wish you well
in our hearts, we pray you will excel

Maybe we shall meet again,
in happiness or in pain
but there's something we'll always do
We'll always think of you

You just have to follow your heart
as you depart, we'll never be apart
Wherever you may be or go,
we'll always say hello!

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Farewell - you will be loved

Contributed by 03614 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:01:28 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Why is it, that you have to go?
there are greater things we owe
A full thanks for your love
you will always be our beloved

For all the things we needed to know,
to us you have showed
We wish you could stay
just for one more day

We know you're going to a greater place
where you will be welcomed and embraced
we wish you well
in our hearts, we pray you will excel

Maybe we shall meet again,
in happiness or in pain
but there's something we'll always do
We'll always think of you

You just have to follow your heart
as you depart, we'll never be apart
Wherever you may be or go,
we'll always say hello!

Copyright © 03614 ... [ 2004-08-27 19:01:28]
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Re: Farewell - you will be loved (User Rating: 1 )
by 03614 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:09:49 PM AEST
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Wow! Your poem is really cool. It made me remember when one of my teachers also went. I still miss her. Your poem has moved me. Thank you for the inspiration and the assurance. Fascinating!!!

Re: Farewell - you will be loved (User Rating: 1 )
by 03614 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:10:44 PM AEST
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Re: Farewell - you will be loved (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:42:52 PM AEST
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hrm good write. your make it seem like your teacher died and was brought back to life.

Re: Farewell - you will be loved (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 03:50:44 PM AEST
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A good write, I can relate. I am curious to know how this situation ended, as I am currently facing a similar incident. Good write, though, if you were looking for comments, the last stanza feels like it is a forced rhyme. Great job!

Jane

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