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From my eyes
Are left now

I am standing here
Like an old tree
Bent and doddered

Heart like glass
So easily fused
In the desert of dreams

Only web gauzy
Keeps rest of body
Together

This rain
Will never again
Revive

Little one,
You´re dying now,
So good bye.

Krystaly soli
Už jenom zbyly
Z mých slz

Jako strom starý
Suchý a ohnutý
Stojím tu

Srdce jako sklo
V žáru se rozteklo
V poušti snů

Jen pavučina tenká
Drží zbytek těla
Pohromadě

Tenhle déšť
Už nestihne
Znovu vzkřísit

Maličká,
Umíráš,
Tak sbohem

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Good bye Sbohem

Contributed by Aika on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Salty crystals
From my eyes
Are left now

I am standing here
Like an old tree
Bent and doddered

Heart like glass
So easily fused
In the desert of dreams

Only web gauzy
Keeps rest of body
Together

This rain
Will never again
Revive

Little one,
You´re dying now,
So good bye.

Krystaly soli
Už jenom zbyly
Z mých slz

Jako strom starý
Suchý a ohnutý
Stojím tu

Srdce jako sklo
V žáru se rozteklo
V poušti snů

Jen pavučina tenká
Drží zbytek těla
Pohromadě

Tenhle déšť
Už nestihne
Znovu vzkřísit

Maličká,
Umíráš,
Tak sbohem

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-08-27 15:08:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Good bye Sbohem (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:47:41 PM AEST
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so very sad but a beautiful write

Shari

Re: Good bye Sbohem (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 06:50:12 PM AEST
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ohhhh so sad............... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Good bye Sbohem (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:44:15 PM AEST
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Sadness and pain bound together in this.How poignant that you use the word "goodbye", since knowing you as I do I know its not a word you like to use, that word of finality.I hope it really isn't goodbye from that little girl

steve

Re: Good bye Sbohem (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 08:31:44 PM AEST
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Oh My Aika, this is truly heart breaking....
I'm not sure whom you mean by this write,
I only pray that it's not you and you are going to be all right!
Does this mean you are saying goodbye to us your poets and friends?
Please let me know dear.....I fear.
Can't image coming to YPDC and not find you here?
Love you....beautiful, sad, resigned write
hugs
conniemom

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