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People, come and go in ones life, but, somestay deeper and burn in the memorys of the mind
You try and only memorize the wonderful, times,........but the sad and lonely can never be earased......But you continue on
You see what the one who has done so much for you, in all ways, and keep going, and needing
But, theres something missing, the one thing that you havent had from the one who you need it from
See, that is why one worries so much, and needs so much...its not want, but its the heart....to keep going and knowing
The heart that was giving a chance to have for alittle while, even if it is taken from them
Please heed to the needs, and not wants..........becuase they give for more, and take for nothing...........its because they care [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Thoughts

Contributed by brew on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Falling..........and hiding! To the things that hit hard, but one knows they are part of the continuing life, that we all have!
People, come and go in ones life, but, somestay deeper and burn in the memorys of the mind
You try and only memorize the wonderful, times,........but the sad and lonely can never be earased......But you continue on
You see what the one who has done so much for you, in all ways, and keep going, and needing
But, theres something missing, the one thing that you havent had from the one who you need it from
See, that is why one worries so much, and needs so much...its not want, but its the heart....to keep going and knowing
The heart that was giving a chance to have for alittle while, even if it is taken from them
Please heed to the needs, and not wants..........becuase they give for more, and take for nothing...........its because they care




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Re: Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:18:17 PM AEST
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I have pockets in my heart...where memories stay and thoughts linger; I wish some of them would leave, alas, they stay, like lint in a dust ruffle...great poem.


Re: Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:03:22 AM AEST
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Sweet memories, blend into needs and wants, and wishes and dreams.

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing this.

Chris




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