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bad displeased woman

Contributed by cauchy3 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:54:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



bad displeased woman

------To whom offend me on web-----

Her minds are pink her dresses are down

Name in belts and face in bands

Whistles of wolves to young in town

Pay for whistles she lost her stands


Toes are silver hearts are old

Nellie is weak minds of coppers

Skeans are smart and that stumble is horse

The legs of stockings are pale in hole


Hire her coat from whore in shops

Puffed looks cover her shorts

The ball is bauble of rascal gangs

She opens all her needs in ball



Carved the bills to love agents

She has deep pains in her ages

The fault is on night not in darks

Cartoons on strips are stripper s arts


Only she is the unaware dancer

She must earn the shifts in lives

Coins are returned in shilly-shally

She gives all to gear the riffles




Shear hairs and cut ruffs

Soft in core and hard in surfaces

Signals of innate old whores

One s who but who s who


Dark reside in her heart

Pennies are shinning on beams

She goes down one stair

Gratitude to sons of two Harry


Sing a song of goodness in vain

Glees are rhythms blue in plains

Loves are sick but moneys are lack

Kudo in judo to twist the angel



Lift her shoes silly on turners

For coins never too shy or prude

Turning points for her good stocks

Sexes are null and loves deform


With bucks her body has net.(weight)

Internal but not external little dews

Absorbed by leafs that are yellow

Hips are wreaked but have low pulls

-------Revenge by Cheung shun sang=cauchy3-------


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Re: bad displeased woman (User Rating: 1 )
by pvd on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:43:17 AM AEST
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I guess you are seeking poetic justice with this interesting write.
PVD


Re: bad displeased woman (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:41:20 PM AEST
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I agree with PVD


Re: bad displeased woman (User Rating: 1 )
by happykelly on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:29:28 AM AEST
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this is a very good poem... it reminds me of my mother


Re: bad displeased woman (User Rating: 1 )
by Belcha on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 06:21:00 AM AEST
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clazy, absowutly clazy !!






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