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The Love Of My Life
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:46:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Jean-Christophe Maymat
The Love Of My Life
Written For My Niece Eve Portias
And The Maymat Family
How lucky did I get
to have met such a wonderful man The warmth we both felt
walking hand and hand
He was all that I desired
the dream man of my life
I would have made him
a more than perfect wife
I carry within my body
his daughter, soon to be born
As she grows older
together we will morn
The father she never had
but would have loved him with her heart
Why did God have to take you
and keep us all apart
Jean-Christophe, my darling
know how much we care
How very much we will miss
the life we did not share
As you look down upon us
hear these words I say
I love you with my heart
and miss you more each day
Our daughter, when she arrives
will miss you just as much
The two of us forever
will miss your gentle touch
The two of us will love you
until the day we die
One by one we will join you
in our home up in the sky
To be together forever
and all our love to give
Enjoying one another
in the life we did not live
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-08-26 23:46:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 12:41:30 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful... just beautiful!!! Kinda heart wreching too... Loved it!
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:07:39 AM AEST (User
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thats so beautiful and so so sad...I almost cried....great job!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by karrie on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:35:15 AM AEST (User
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was so sad pulled at my heart strings but i must say very good, brought tears to my eyes..
keep up the good writing, very touching..
karen |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:26:54 AM AEST (User
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Sad but beautiful....... |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 12:43:54 PM AEST (User
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very heart wreching write but yet so sweet and very beautifully written as well. great job
Brandy |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:17:44 PM AEST (User
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Such a sad beautiful poem.
Reading through this poem tears were streaming down my face. So very sorry may god bless you all
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:19:24 PM AEST (User
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you were very right saying this was sad. this is poetry in true form to the emotional outpour.
"To be together forever
and all our love to give
Enjoying one another
in the life we did not live" truely amazing and outstanding ending. |
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