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From the black clouds above
It grabs me by my hair
And pulls me into the clouds
There I am held
And I stand watching
All of the people
That I’ve known
Through the years
There they are before me
Acting out their livid lives
So locked up with their fears
They live in their sadness
Thriving off other’s anger
Hurting each other
Such a tragic sight
One that will not end
The crushed faces
With tears in their eyes
So lost in who they are
And where they belong
They look for answers
But don’t find any
So they continue on…
In this world
Lost in their tragic lives…
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So Lost In Our Tragic Lives...

Contributed by pyrofungus on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:06:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

A hand reaches out to me
From the black clouds above
It grabs me by my hair
And pulls me into the clouds
There I am held
And I stand watching
All of the people
That I’ve known
Through the years
There they are before me
Acting out their livid lives
So locked up with their fears
They live in their sadness
Thriving off other’s anger
Hurting each other
Such a tragic sight
One that will not end
The crushed faces
With tears in their eyes
So lost in who they are
And where they belong
They look for answers
But don’t find any
So they continue on…
In this world
Lost in their tragic lives…

Copyright Â© pyrofungus ... [ 2004-08-26 15:06:26]
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Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFey on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:22:55 PM AEST
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The imagery to this write was wonderful, really great and creative write!! DarkFey

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:36:23 PM AEST
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Very creative. Good job.

Heartfilledblood

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:02:12 AM AEST
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hopefully, not to many you know in that situation, good write

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 02:46:47 AM AEST
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SO SAD! YOU SOUND TOO NICE TO GO THRU SOMETHING LIKE THIS!! LOOK INTO THE BLUE UP IN THE SKY,& FEEL JUST HOW TRUE LOVE CAN BE FOR HEAVEN DOESN'T LIE!!!

SMILE!
DAN!!

NICE POEM!!!

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 04:51:21 AM AEST
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Awsome imagary, It was like being there feeling the loss, excellent write keep it up.

Take care

Kindragon

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:07:28 PM AEST
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~WOW~awsome write man,full with emotions so deep...keep up the wonderful work

savedbydeath

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:40:49 PM AEST
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i like that poem alot its how iam in away i liked it alot thou good write

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:27:34 PM AEST
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I really like your point of view in this one. Standing out watching what goes on in life. Gives me something to think about.
Thank you. I'll try not to be caught up too much in my own life to see that other people suffer from my actions. Thanks again for that beam of light.
Take care.
David

Re: So Lost In Our Tragic Lives... (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:09:24 PM AEST
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Oh... hope neat!!!

Your style is supurb
fantanstic imagination
cheers!

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