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Array ( [sid] => 61487 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mind Like An Empty Page [time] => 2004-08-26 14:11:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My mind is like an empty page,
Numbed from all the past hate & rage,
Not feeling anything from love to stress,
Head is in somewhat of a mess.

Hurt & pain have long resided,
In my ears they have confided,
Long done their ever lasting damage,
Gave me more than I could possibly manage.

Heart hangs low in my chest,
Longing to be held & softly caressed,
Dreams have gradually faded,
Been destroyed from a past that’s jaded.

Never thought that this would happen,
That my red blooded heart could blacken,
It could be broke right into two,
This has happened because of my love for you.

Love has hurt & made me bleed,
My dead plant grew from a tainted seed,
A mind that is troubled beyond belief,
Holds deep fear & shakes like a leaf.

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Mind Like An Empty Page

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:11:17 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My mind is like an empty page,
Numbed from all the past hate & rage,
Not feeling anything from love to stress,
Head is in somewhat of a mess.

Hurt & pain have long resided,
In my ears they have confided,
Long done their ever lasting damage,
Gave me more than I could possibly manage.

Heart hangs low in my chest,
Longing to be held & softly caressed,
Dreams have gradually faded,
Been destroyed from a past that’s jaded.

Never thought that this would happen,
That my red blooded heart could blacken,
It could be broke right into two,
This has happened because of my love for you.

Love has hurt & made me bleed,
My dead plant grew from a tainted seed,
A mind that is troubled beyond belief,
Holds deep fear & shakes like a leaf.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-08-26 14:11:17]
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Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:20:39 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one here..Very well done..

AfterDark..

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 02:32:25 PM AEST
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God bless you, , Take care.

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:37:35 PM AEST
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ever lasting damage......you know I feel you on this one,crippled pilgrims unite!!!!Well written
love the flow.....

The Wind

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:56:14 PM AEST
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The title alone drew me to read this one, I love it.
As for the poem, it simply flows all the way down the page.
I especially liked the lines
"Heart hangs low in my chest,
Longing to be held & softly caressed"

Good work

Steve

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:04:50 AM AEST
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I agree w/ Steve... the titla alone is what drew me in... I can relate to this as well...
it hits homw w/ me... thank you fo sharing...
good write...
~Donna~

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:06:35 AM AEST
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Ohho..it is sad..but very nicely expressed...god bless my friend. venkat

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 10:42:33 AM AEST
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This is a write that I relate to so much, tainted seed......yes indeed.....bitter memories to be shut out......no more to worry over, to fight or to fret......thank you so much for sharing this.

chris

Re: Mind Like An Empty Page (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:38:30 AM AEST
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My, you've done an apt job of describing your feelings here. The rhyme is a nice touch, too.
Good work.
Stitch

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