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Array ( [sid] => 61455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No to Suicide [time] => 2004-08-26 08:24:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => suicide why does it have to be the end
can't you just sit up and try to defend
yourself your feelin' blue
I know it sounds true
but what else you say is to do?

Believe in yourself
think only the best
don't do what the others do eg. the rest
take hold of yourself
climb out of that dark hole
life sucks you think
take another blink
and open your eyes at the mirror

your beautiful inside
let it come out
don't let those nice feelings hide
create a song
that you are proud of
and let all the good moments
pass you by

in your memories pick out them
throw the shabby ones away
clutch on to this
and you wont miss
the knife you are holding today

God made you he loves you
don't let Satan take control
the image that you see
is caused by He
so stand up and walk on tall

the worst thing you can do
is kill yourself- true
as you will never escape what you've done
the crime you will pay
will be told to you later okay
so promise me that that time will never come
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No to Suicide

Contributed by inoc on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 08:24:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

suicide why does it have to be the end
can't you just sit up and try to defend
yourself your feelin' blue
I know it sounds true
but what else you say is to do?

Believe in yourself
think only the best
don't do what the others do eg. the rest
take hold of yourself
climb out of that dark hole
life sucks you think
take another blink
and open your eyes at the mirror

your beautiful inside
let it come out
don't let those nice feelings hide
create a song
that you are proud of
and let all the good moments
pass you by

in your memories pick out them
throw the shabby ones away
clutch on to this
and you wont miss
the knife you are holding today

God made you he loves you
don't let Satan take control
the image that you see
is caused by He
so stand up and walk on tall

the worst thing you can do
is kill yourself- true
as you will never escape what you've done
the crime you will pay
will be told to you later okay
so promise me that that time will never come

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-08-26 08:24:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No to Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:49:10 PM AEST
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a very true write... I tried to take my own life and I now know that it isn't the answer, as it just leaves a trail of heartache behind you..

pixie xx

good write

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