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Array ( [sid] => 61444 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Do You Do? [time] => 2004-08-26 04:03:02 [hometext] => its pretty self explanitory.. tell me what you think please.... [bodytext] => What do you do,
When nothing seems right?
When everything is messed up,
When you’re confused?

When you thought you were stronger
Then ever before,
But all of a sudden,
You turn out weaker then ever.

You start coming out,
From behind your wall,
But end up finding out your wall,
Was the place you need to be the most.

When people get close is,
When you get hurt the most.
When people start to see the real you,
Is when you get hurt.

When people realize
That there is something wrong
It’ll be too late to help.
When too many years,
Equals way too much pain.

Where there is too much pain,
To care anymore,
Care about anything.
When your friends,
Are the only things,
that matter.
Even when you don’t want to hurt them

The only way to keep yourself
Sane is to stay how you are

Wanting your friends,
To know that,
That they mean the world to you.
So you are helping them the only way,
You know how.

Staying how I am
Is only hurting me
Cause no one really knows
The ***** I have been through
And the pain I have.

No one will know how much
Pain I really have
Cause I will never talk about anything
To do with my emotions
No one will ever really know
I cant cause anymore pain to anyone
I will remain with no problems!
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 65 [informant] => oreo_kisses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
What Do You Do?

Contributed by oreo_kisses on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 04:03:02 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



What do you do,
When nothing seems right?
When everything is messed up,
When you’re confused?

When you thought you were stronger
Then ever before,
But all of a sudden,
You turn out weaker then ever.

You start coming out,
From behind your wall,
But end up finding out your wall,
Was the place you need to be the most.

When people get close is,
When you get hurt the most.
When people start to see the real you,
Is when you get hurt.

When people realize
That there is something wrong
It’ll be too late to help.
When too many years,
Equals way too much pain.

Where there is too much pain,
To care anymore,
Care about anything.
When your friends,
Are the only things,
that matter.
Even when you don’t want to hurt them

The only way to keep yourself
Sane is to stay how you are

Wanting your friends,
To know that,
That they mean the world to you.
So you are helping them the only way,
You know how.

Staying how I am
Is only hurting me
Cause no one really knows
The ***** I have been through
And the pain I have.

No one will know how much
Pain I really have
Cause I will never talk about anything
To do with my emotions
No one will ever really know
I cant cause anymore pain to anyone
I will remain with no problems!




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Re: What Do You Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:46:50 AM AEST
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oreo_kisses - the comments I've made on your other poem apply here.

I will add one -> you are seriously NOT alone

Jordan oxo


Re: What Do You Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:31:37 AM AEST
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your the ooposite of me...i ask for help or show signs of pain...and i don't get help...just ask hun...i'm here if you need someone to talk to...just hit me up...

please comment on my work too
summer


Re: What Do You Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:31:14 AM AEST
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yes your not alone on this one, i too when in pain and it feels like no one knows until it feels like it is too late. nice write.




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