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Is the torture
That will not disappear
From my soul

The pain
Keeps on
With keeping me
From being happy

Since its
Not creating an easier life
It creates illness
A depression

It doesn’t leave
It just sits there
And tortures me
My soul
My life
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The Pain

Contributed by oreo_kisses on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:52:35 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Pain
Is the torture
That will not disappear
From my soul

The pain
Keeps on
With keeping me
From being happy

Since its
Not creating an easier life
It creates illness
A depression

It doesn’t leave
It just sits there
And tortures me
My soul
My life

Copyright Â© oreo_kisses ... [ 2004-08-26 03:52:35]
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Re: The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:52:02 AM AEST
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Hang in there....... and keep writing :o)

Jordan oxo

Re: The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:57:58 AM AEST
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On second thoughts...

Here's something I wrote about 20 years ago...

If winds of fate
have frowned your smile
as winds of fate may do,
then cast your eyes
upon a one
who feels just like you do;
a one who's felt
the lonely void
as dark and cold abyss,
and knows too well
the fears that dwell
in such a place as this.

Jordan oxo

Re: The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:00:52 AM AEST
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i can understand from your poem that you feel from day to day that you have pain that is torturning you would be good to see you express just what sort of pain

Re: The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 08:04:58 AM AEST
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Your poem sounded heart breaking,,,
keep your chin up
and....

[I don't want to lecture you but have you tried turning to prayer with a open honest heart?]

cheers!

Re: The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:25:57 AM AEST
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I can empathize with you feeling a lot of pain. Often there is nothing we can do to change our circumstances, so what is left? The only options that I know are to attempt to take a different attitude toward our circumstances and to rely on our faith and prayer.

Re: The Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:28:49 AM AEST
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I can empathize with you feeling a lot of pain. Often there is nothing we can do to change our circumstances, so what is left? The only options that I know are to attempt to take a different attitude toward our circumstances and to rely on our faith and prayer.

God Bless, Willofree

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