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Array ( [sid] => 61377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vengence [time] => 2004-08-25 14:35:01 [hometext] => Just a quick note I have two follow up pieces to this I will post soon, DarkFey [bodytext] => Twisting and turning in this knot of pain.
I reach for your hand, but you lay there
slain. Your blood runs thick across this
crusted plain.

The sun beats down. I see the shadows of
the vultures swirling above. I scream your
name, you can't come back to me, it's all
in vain.

Grief washes over me. I curl up as if in
mothers womb, and let it take me to you.
In memories of the gentlest touch and looks
exchanged.

How will I ever get up from here and make
my own way, without you? Looking into your
glassy eyes, knowing it's true. Finally I
accept that death has taken you.

Pursuing vengence for the blood that wets
the sand. Trembling in insanity I take your
gun in my hand. Seeking the path of the men
that took you. Murder and reckoning will come
to them soon.

They took you from me for no reason atoll.
Except that you were better, better than all.
And I promise to kill them, kill them all. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => DarkFey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Vengence

Contributed by DarkFey on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Twisting and turning in this knot of pain.
I reach for your hand, but you lay there
slain. Your blood runs thick across this
crusted plain.

The sun beats down. I see the shadows of
the vultures swirling above. I scream your
name, you can't come back to me, it's all
in vain.

Grief washes over me. I curl up as if in
mothers womb, and let it take me to you.
In memories of the gentlest touch and looks
exchanged.

How will I ever get up from here and make
my own way, without you? Looking into your
glassy eyes, knowing it's true. Finally I
accept that death has taken you.

Pursuing vengence for the blood that wets
the sand. Trembling in insanity I take your
gun in my hand. Seeking the path of the men
that took you. Murder and reckoning will come
to them soon.

They took you from me for no reason atoll.
Except that you were better, better than all.
And I promise to kill them, kill them all.




Copyright © DarkFey ... [ 2004-08-25 14:35:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Vengence (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:41:35 PM AEST
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this was pretty powerful. i really like it thus far.
cant wait for the rest.
great work
Arden


Re: Vengence (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:01:48 PM AEST
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Woah... powerful is an understatement... I love the last verse, I just hope that you don't find out how unsatisfying vengence can be...

Jaime


Re: Vengence (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:54:21 PM AEST
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Eagerly waiting as well ...

Nazmythian ~


Re: Vengence (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 08:17:58 PM AEST
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i agree with the other comments =]


Re: Vengence (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:11:27 PM AEST
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i like this alot...ill be loikng out for the other pices...awesome job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: Vengence (User Rating: 1 )
by pvd on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 01:36:39 PM AEST
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Good story line. An epic ballard inthe making.
Keep it coming.
PVD




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