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Array ( [sid] => 6137 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Acid to the Free Flow [time] => 2002-11-03 09:30:00 [hometext] => Someparts related to Kim. [bodytext] => A time; A lonley time; filled with nothing.
Every day I was sad.
Never knowing; just kept going
Too numb to be mad.

Then there was you

A time; Exciting anticipation with every date
Every day there was love
Life was wild; like the flow of the Nile
Like a blessing from above

Then we did it

Warmth; A hot sweaty euphoric warmth inside and out
Each moment was forever
We were one; a lot of fun
Enveloped in pleasure

I professed my love

Fear; Deap seated fear from the last time with that other one
Acid to the free flow
Your hair was stunning; as I saw you running
You were running from me though

Then I put on my sweater

Warm; Comfortably warm on a cool fall day
The scented candles burning
Deeply relaxed; it's nice to be back
At least I'm learning.

jz

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 455 [topic] => 24 [informant] => norticus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Acid to the Free Flow

Contributed by norticus on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

A time; A lonley time; filled with nothing.
Every day I was sad.
Never knowing; just kept going
Too numb to be mad.

Then there was you

A time; Exciting anticipation with every date
Every day there was love
Life was wild; like the flow of the Nile
Like a blessing from above

Then we did it

Warmth; A hot sweaty euphoric warmth inside and out
Each moment was forever
We were one; a lot of fun
Enveloped in pleasure

I professed my love

Fear; Deap seated fear from the last time with that other one
Acid to the free flow
Your hair was stunning; as I saw you running
You were running from me though

Then I put on my sweater

Warm; Comfortably warm on a cool fall day
The scented candles burning
Deeply relaxed; it's nice to be back
At least I'm learning.

jz

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Re: Acid to the Free Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 11:48:17 AM AEST
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This was definately different
I really enjoyed reading this
Very beautiful write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Acid to the Free Flow (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 01:13:30 PM AEST
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Dear Norticus @-<-<<-
An excellent and beautiful write.. you have captured the words and made them feelings with a life of their own..
always Nessa

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