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[aid] => mick
[title] => You Make Me Sick
[time] => 2004-08-25 12:51:31
[hometext] => these kinds of creatures make me shudder and my skin crawl.....
[bodytext] => You make me feel so sick,
I can only imagine what makes you tick,
You steal young girl’s innocence,
But in your head it all makes sense.
People like you shouldn’t walk the earth,
A sewer rat has much more worth,
You don’t deserve to live & breathe,
How you’re still alive I can’t believe.
Someone should give you just desserts,
I’m sure you’ve inflicted pain & hurt,
To poor & innocent young girls,
Who shouldn’t have a care in the world.
But creatures like you take form,
Rape, abuse & inflict great harm,
Prey on the naïve & reel them in,
Taking their childhood, throwing it in the bin.
One day you will really get yours,
For the true sickness that seeps from your pores,
I hope that someone exploits you,
My words from my heart are always spoken true
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
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You Make Me Sick
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pixie
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:51:31 PM in AEST
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You make me feel so sick,
I can only imagine what makes you tick,
You steal young girl’s innocence,
But in your head it all makes sense.
People like you shouldn’t walk the earth,
A sewer rat has much more worth,
You don’t deserve to live & breathe,
How you’re still alive I can’t believe.
Someone should give you just desserts,
I’m sure you’ve inflicted pain & hurt,
To poor & innocent young girls,
Who shouldn’t have a care in the world.
But creatures like you take form,
Rape, abuse & inflict great harm,
Prey on the naïve & reel them in,
Taking their childhood, throwing it in the bin.
One day you will really get yours,
For the true sickness that seeps from your pores,
I hope that someone exploits you,
My words from my heart are always spoken true
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pixie
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2004-08-25 12:51:31]
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:09:09 PM AEST
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awsome poem pixie!
yea, i hope all those ***holes [pardon my language] get whats comeing to them!
tweek |
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:13:19 PM AEST
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pixie this was totally awesome I for one enjoyed it and I could feel your anger in this one. great write. take care and thanks for all your comments that you left on my poems.
Brandy |
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:16:09 PM AEST
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Yay Pixie.
I've been waiting for you to post this all day. lol
Oh and i totally agree.
(But i think you know that. lol)
*hugs*
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:35:27 PM AEST
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knowing what made you write this, i must say again, a strong moving write, very well written and has truth and passion of belief written all over it, well done, personally i dont know how those people sleep at night or face themselves in the mirror,
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by Calista on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:38:27 PM AEST
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this was a really strong poem, pixie, and i 'm glad you could write it...for yourself, and for everyone else out there who knows/feels the same way. thanks,
~Calista |
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by Stoney1 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:53:19 PM AEST
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Sure can't argue with the sentiment of the poem. Pretty well written too.
These guys are never going to be cured.
It used to be that when they got sent to prison, one could depend upon the
inmate population to finish them off so that any idea of parole was considered
a non sequiter.
But, in the last few years, steps have been taken by the bureau of prisons,
to isolate these individuals from the general population, and this reduces the
chance of getting at them to,"do the right thing'"
Therefore, many of these recidivists have been released back into the general
societal population to wreak addition havoc (Holly Klast) against the innocent
before being sent back to prison where the psychriatists can study them some
more.
Such is life; you get a good system going for ridding society of these degenerates,
and some beaucrat thinks up a way of preserving them for future study...only then
they're eventually let back out.
Stoney |
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:27:16 PM AEST
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Wow i say that is a very stronge poem.
Powerful write... |
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Re: You Make Me Sick
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:58:23 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional write. people like that are repulsive. |
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