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So nice to be home again
the vacation was to long
Seven weeks away from here
now back, where I belong

Not that the vacation
was not absolutely grand
But me, just being me
like everything in hand

Things like the internet
dialup is too slow
Had to get back to dsl
so faster I could go

Yes The mountains are beautiful
and the air is very fresh
In the heat of the summer
a good place to refresh

I am sure health wise
it is better to be there
Just sitting and relaxing
feeling like a millionaire

The inspiration that I got
for writing what I did
Made me feel young again
almost like a kid

You cannot have every thing
just the way you want
So I will go on living as I do
continuing to be nonchalant

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A Finished Vacation

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic: Event

So nice to be home again
the vacation was to long
Seven weeks away from here
now back, where I belong

Not that the vacation
was not absolutely grand
But me, just being me
like everything in hand

Things like the internet
dialup is too slow
Had to get back to dsl
so faster I could go

Yes The mountains are beautiful
and the air is very fresh
In the heat of the summer
a good place to refresh

I am sure health wise
it is better to be there
Just sitting and relaxing
feeling like a millionaire

The inspiration that I got
for writing what I did
Made me feel young again
almost like a kid

You cannot have every thing
just the way you want
So I will go on living as I do
continuing to be nonchalant

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-08-25 05:26:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Finished Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:31:10 AM AEST
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Very refreshing write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: A Finished Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:24:21 PM AEST
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i like this. i ask one question...
is this dedicated to anyone or anything?

love forever
stew

Re: A Finished Vacation (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:45:02 AM AEST
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What a great write. It's so true. I dread going on vacatoins.
Blu

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