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Array ( [sid] => 61319 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Full Circle [time] => 2004-08-25 03:50:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dewdrops shined liked diamonds
Beneath an ogre of a tree
Not one parting word was spoken
From the fading red outline of her lips
The air was calm but reeked a stench
Of madness, gloom and hate
A colored blue contact lens
Lay curled and dry upon her pale cheek
Her hair once was butterscotch
Now a stained nest of crimson
A broken heel lay by her hip
A bare foot testing the bitter breeze
Somewhere beneath her lay one hand
Tightly fisted the other above her head
When they took her away on a white wheeled bed
They covered her beaten face with a sheet
The wheels stumbled briefly upon some rocks
Which jumbled her hand just enough
From her hand dropped a note
This is what it said...
For better for worse I loved him
Honestly, completely right up to the end
From who I am, foregiveness I give
But even in death I will not forget
Where is he you can bet I'll be
Haunting the world all around him... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Lia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Full Circle

Contributed by Lia on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:50:50 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Dewdrops shined liked diamonds
Beneath an ogre of a tree
Not one parting word was spoken
From the fading red outline of her lips
The air was calm but reeked a stench
Of madness, gloom and hate
A colored blue contact lens
Lay curled and dry upon her pale cheek
Her hair once was butterscotch
Now a stained nest of crimson
A broken heel lay by her hip
A bare foot testing the bitter breeze
Somewhere beneath her lay one hand
Tightly fisted the other above her head
When they took her away on a white wheeled bed
They covered her beaten face with a sheet
The wheels stumbled briefly upon some rocks
Which jumbled her hand just enough
From her hand dropped a note
This is what it said...
For better for worse I loved him
Honestly, completely right up to the end
From who I am, foregiveness I give
But even in death I will not forget
Where is he you can bet I'll be
Haunting the world all around him...

Copyright © Lia ... [ 2004-08-25 03:50:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by sunshiny on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:49:03 PM AEST
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I love your originality. Revenge from a woman, even in death...I like how you can just imagine the story before. What has happened to this woman for her to feel this way. Thanks for the poem. I like poems I have to think about...Neat!

Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 04:45:06 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Full Circle (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 19th December 2007 @ 12:07:29 PM AEST
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This is an amazing write.......I was stopped dead in my tracks reading it, mesmerised from start to finish
Superb !!

Steve

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