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[aid] => mick
[title] => Bullet on loan
[time] => 2004-08-25 03:31:22
[hometext] => I coming from an weird place, this an odd write for me. So get what you get from this, and let me know what you think.
[bodytext] => Your grin makes me shake from the bottom of my tender soles to the inside places that nobody but me knows barely breathing I wonder if I am even truly awake I can smell your scent before I ever see you the first hint of your essence and dread over takes sanity how could god let someone like you lose on humanity our last encounter left my soul blackened as well as blue I fired the gun without any emotional sense of defilement the bullet was on loan so if you would please give it back I am not worried about the blood or the guilt that I lack cause my warrior needs his ammo to complete his assignment in the school yard where you would wait for me I gaze with open eyes at a past that won't old wounds die how you would hold my hand to comfort me while telling a lie how could someone I loved so innocently cause so much misery when you abandoned me I opened my veins gently with splintered glass to pour out all the impure things you did but the blood letting didn't relieve the secrets I hide you turned a good little girl into a dark angel of bast your grin makes me cry as your clamy hands touch my tighs why is my shell the one you choose to defile I slip out of my body just like I am going to die silently my warrior wakes me with a empathic stare with the bullet in his hand without a word I understand that you can never again make my cross for me to bare. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sheri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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