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Array ( [sid] => 61306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Sad Song [time] => 2004-08-25 01:27:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Im laying here in my bed,
So many thoughts going through my head,
Cant forget about what you said,
or the things that you did,
When i think about it, it makes me so sad,
makes me so mad,
This sadness is killing me really bad,

Chorus: This is my Sad Song, I know yall heard one before,
Im so upset, cant take this anymore,
Why did you do me that way?,
Why did you take your love away,

Im sick of being lonely, Im tired of crying,
Sick of the fighting, even sick of the lying,
I thought we would of been together,
I was hoping our love would of lasted forever,

Repeat

You broke my heart,
You tore my World apart,
You put my though this Pain,
This hurt drives me so insane,
I put my trust in you,
look at what you had to do,

Repeat

Sometimes I believe that love isnt real,
Cant help the way that I feel,
Love is just a dream,
Thats the way it seems,
Dont think ill ever love again,
Dont think my Heart will ever mend
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 513 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Jenn2004 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

My Sad Song

Contributed by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:27:19 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Im laying here in my bed,
So many thoughts going through my head,
Cant forget about what you said,
or the things that you did,
When i think about it, it makes me so sad,
makes me so mad,
This sadness is killing me really bad,

Chorus: This is my Sad Song, I know yall heard one before,
Im so upset, cant take this anymore,
Why did you do me that way?,
Why did you take your love away,

Im sick of being lonely, Im tired of crying,
Sick of the fighting, even sick of the lying,
I thought we would of been together,
I was hoping our love would of lasted forever,

Repeat

You broke my heart,
You tore my World apart,
You put my though this Pain,
This hurt drives me so insane,
I put my trust in you,
look at what you had to do,

Repeat

Sometimes I believe that love isnt real,
Cant help the way that I feel,
Love is just a dream,
Thats the way it seems,
Dont think ill ever love again,
Dont think my Heart will ever mend

Copyright © Jenn2004 ... [ 2004-08-25 01:27:19]
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Re: My Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Buggsy on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:31:42 AM AEST
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I must say that this is great, I love it.

Re: My Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by artostuff on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:02:32 AM AEST
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A touching song, to be sung on a autums surmise. Love is as the day, rising till mid day and in a anti-climax will pass away with a boon to bloom another day.

Re: My Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:56:28 PM AEST
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good job here...i liked this quite alot..

AfterDark..

Re: My Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:43:18 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
a masterpeice.
Put it to music and watch it hit the top of the charts.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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