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Array ( [sid] => 61303 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Failure [time] => 2004-08-25 00:16:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Im tired of this life i live
I have nothing to give
Im sorry i hurt those i love
Sorry im not sent from above,
Like you think i am

Sorry I ruined your ife
And that Im something you never wanted
Im a dissopointment to you and i know it

Im tired of being alone
Being looked at and treated like a freak
And you say its my fault
Im tired of being made fun of, critisized and discrimintaed against

No one would care if I died
People say they do, I just dont think its true
Who would care about an ugly, stupid, annoying lesbian like me?
Because what you say kills me inside
Makes me want to kill myself
Cause you make me feel like you hate me,
Everthing about me

You've never said how much your proud of who i became
How much you support me
How much you are here for me

You said you would love me no matter what
Its just bull****, cause the things you say, act and do
To say how much you dont like who i am

Can you hear me crying now?
Your hurting me so much
Im cutting because of you
See what your putting me through?
I guess theres nothing more to do
Except kill myself and end your pain
Cause by me and how i dissopoint and fail you

If im causing you so much pian,
Why dont I end it?
Your second daughter can relive your dreams
And wont dissopoint you,
Wont be a failure


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The Failure

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:16:33 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Im tired of this life i live
I have nothing to give
Im sorry i hurt those i love
Sorry im not sent from above,
Like you think i am

Sorry I ruined your ife
And that Im something you never wanted
Im a dissopointment to you and i know it

Im tired of being alone
Being looked at and treated like a freak
And you say its my fault
Im tired of being made fun of, critisized and discrimintaed against

No one would care if I died
People say they do, I just dont think its true
Who would care about an ugly, stupid, annoying lesbian like me?
Because what you say kills me inside
Makes me want to kill myself
Cause you make me feel like you hate me,
Everthing about me

You've never said how much your proud of who i became
How much you support me
How much you are here for me

You said you would love me no matter what
Its just bull****, cause the things you say, act and do
To say how much you dont like who i am

Can you hear me crying now?
Your hurting me so much
Im cutting because of you
See what your putting me through?
I guess theres nothing more to do
Except kill myself and end your pain
Cause by me and how i dissopoint and fail you

If im causing you so much pian,
Why dont I end it?
Your second daughter can relive your dreams
And wont dissopoint you,
Wont be a failure






Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-08-25 00:16:33]
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Re: The Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:26:27 AM AEST
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OMG!! This is so sad..... Written with so much pain and hurt..... you are not a failure..and don't let anyone make you feel like you are......
Hugs
Jenni


Re: The Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by artostuff on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:47:42 AM AEST
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A very emotional poem. I really hope you make it through, the world really does need you to be yourself not what you think you are.


Re: The Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by subchild on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 12:47:41 PM AEST
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i really love this one..and dont think you are stupid or ugly..I bet you are wonderfull...

Subchild




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