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When the Pieces Fall Into Place

Contributed by CaddishCut on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

For every drop of rain there is a ray of sun For every step taken there is a mile to run For every gust of wind there is a mountain beyond For every breath taken is closer the end will come For every friend lost there is an enemy gained For every satisfaction, there's an even greater pain For every thought taken a dream is born For every new birth is another old mans scorn For every lie bought there's a truth not believed For every life gone there’s another to be conceived For every light dawned darkness soon falls For every love found a new divorce soon calls For every second of lost sleep there’s another night ahead For every goal that is achieved there's a mistake filled with dread For every good there is an evil This is why we are only people

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Re: When the Pieces Fall Into Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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I really liked reading this, there is so much depth and irony in here...well done, this was a great write.

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