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Array ( [sid] => 6128 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Jamie [time] => 2002-11-03 06:30:00 [hometext] => This song "Jamie" It took me 4 days to complete, that's without music. and I wrote it just befor me and my girlfriend had a fight... we are still together if you wanted to know. *And no her name is not jamie.* [bodytext] => Poor Jamie, she was all alone,
walking down, that empty road.
She walks with, her arms together,
Slowly heads towards, that deep dark sea.

She looks up, at the crisped moon,
Tells herself, “I’ll be there soon.”
Close her eyes, and makes a wish,
The jump of faith, for the one she misses.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you.

Well it does not take long
She cannot hold her breath
Underneath that cold water
The shivers, the cold takes effect.

She pops out of the water
Gasping for her life
To see her love again
She heads up for another try.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you.

She’s up where she was before
On that dark empty road
Looking down from the bridge
She shivers from the cold.

She climes up on the rail,
of the bridge on the road.
a familiar voice in her head,
this makes her not let go.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you.

She shivers once again
this voice inside her head
The call from her lost love
she climes down from the bridge.

A tear in her eye
It rolls down her cheek
Sits down and closes her eyes
She dies in her peaceful sleep.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you....

I’ll be with you....I’ll see you...
I’ll come get you....I will never leave you.
Your wish has come true...I’m here with you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 34 [informant] => metalmouth666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Jamie

Contributed by metalmouth666 on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Poor Jamie, she was all alone,
walking down, that empty road.
She walks with, her arms together,
Slowly heads towards, that deep dark sea.

She looks up, at the crisped moon,
Tells herself, “I’ll be there soon.”
Close her eyes, and makes a wish,
The jump of faith, for the one she misses.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you.

Well it does not take long
She cannot hold her breath
Underneath that cold water
The shivers, the cold takes effect.

She pops out of the water
Gasping for her life
To see her love again
She heads up for another try.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you.

She’s up where she was before
On that dark empty road
Looking down from the bridge
She shivers from the cold.

She climes up on the rail,
of the bridge on the road.
a familiar voice in her head,
this makes her not let go.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you.

She shivers once again
this voice inside her head
The call from her lost love
she climes down from the bridge.

A tear in her eye
It rolls down her cheek
Sits down and closes her eyes
She dies in her peaceful sleep.

Dear Jamie come back to me
Don’t you dare leave me.
I can’t live without you.
Why is this happening to me.
Dear Jamie come back to me
I can’t live without you.
How is this happening,
I can’t survive without you....

I’ll be with you....I’ll see you...
I’ll come get you....I will never leave you.
Your wish has come true...I’m here with you.




Copyright © metalmouth666 ... [ 2002-11-03 06:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Jamie (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:38:10 AM AEST
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This is such a good song
write, very sad, and stands
with reality of life in it
Beautiful song
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Jamie (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 07:10:02 AM AEST
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Great write...so very touching...
Jenni


Re: Jamie (User Rating: 1 )
by Haligh on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 03:48:43 AM AEST
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awww. i really love this. good job. :-)




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