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Array ( [sid] => 61252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lady Death [time] => 2004-08-24 16:05:49 [hometext] => now this people is some seriouse dark poetry! comments gratefully accepted! [bodytext] => lurking the allyways
aghast with blood
a dying soul
lingers

the need to kill
ever stronger
overpowering
i hunt

i am Lady Death
gothic beauty
in a swirling
blackness

for my sacraficial pleasures
i find my victem
to satisfy
hunger

drill nails into his hands
pinning him to the floor
his screams
echo

a maliciouse laugh follows
as i claw out his eyes
leaving them
raw

take up my blade
percision slicing
along the
bone

a laugh in pure malice
he crys in pure pain
i tear at his fleash
deliciouse

when shall i finnish
or havent i just
began with
cruelty

i should put him out of his misery
take up my sorrows
into his chest
pull out his
heart

it feels so warm inside his chest
beating in the opn air
i work quickly
to get it

and as suddenly as it began it is over
and he is dead
now among
lost souls

the souls who follow me
gaze connected
to my evil
wrath

i leave his body to the rats
as i take up my leave
and head south
into hiding

taking with me
the evil and death
that hung silently in the air
and another dead and forgotten soul [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Lady Death

Contributed by TwEeK on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



lurking the allyways
aghast with blood
a dying soul
lingers

the need to kill
ever stronger
overpowering
i hunt

i am Lady Death
gothic beauty
in a swirling
blackness

for my sacraficial pleasures
i find my victem
to satisfy
hunger

drill nails into his hands
pinning him to the floor
his screams
echo

a maliciouse laugh follows
as i claw out his eyes
leaving them
raw

take up my blade
percision slicing
along the
bone

a laugh in pure malice
he crys in pure pain
i tear at his fleash
deliciouse

when shall i finnish
or havent i just
began with
cruelty

i should put him out of his misery
take up my sorrows
into his chest
pull out his
heart

it feels so warm inside his chest
beating in the opn air
i work quickly
to get it

and as suddenly as it began it is over
and he is dead
now among
lost souls

the souls who follow me
gaze connected
to my evil
wrath

i leave his body to the rats
as i take up my leave
and head south
into hiding

taking with me
the evil and death
that hung silently in the air
and another dead and forgotten soul




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-08-24 16:05:49]
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Re: Lady Death (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:13:28 PM AEST
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wow, a very dark write, well expressed with great flow,

pixie xx


Re: Lady Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 05:32:12 PM AEST
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That was a very seroius write. i don't know what to make of it much. But none the less you did a MAGNIFICANT job!! I like all of your poems. You are very talented.
ALINA


Re: Lady Death (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFey on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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Creative, dark and awesome!! Great write really liked it, DarkFey




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