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Array ( [sid] => 61248 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Making you Cry [time] => 2004-08-24 14:57:33 [hometext] => meand jake still have got a lot of pain and sore feelings towards each other he is one of the toughest guys youll ever meet and i have hurt him so much he cried and i would do anything to take his pain [bodytext] => your the tough type
the type of guy who never sheds a tear
your hard inside and out
you have no notion of fear
i walked into your life
just as unexpected as our future pain
i caused your body to soften
and you sofetned me as well
what would happen to us
only time would tell
i set fire to our love
i made you cry
now we are trying to decide what to do with our ashes
before we both die
we thought we were going to last
insane as it was
we thought not even death would part us
but we are both so young
both so torn
and broken
our voices quiver with pain
with each word that is spoken
i want to steal all your uncomfort
and replace it with every positive emotion i feel for you
but what do you do when two lovers are so broken
i blame me but you blame yourself for this downfall
why dont we let this make us stronger
instead of letting it desintagrate everything we have took so long to build [comments] => 0 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Making you Cry

Contributed by brokensoul on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



your the tough type
the type of guy who never sheds a tear
your hard inside and out
you have no notion of fear
i walked into your life
just as unexpected as our future pain
i caused your body to soften
and you sofetned me as well
what would happen to us
only time would tell
i set fire to our love
i made you cry
now we are trying to decide what to do with our ashes
before we both die
we thought we were going to last
insane as it was
we thought not even death would part us
but we are both so young
both so torn
and broken
our voices quiver with pain
with each word that is spoken
i want to steal all your uncomfort
and replace it with every positive emotion i feel for you
but what do you do when two lovers are so broken
i blame me but you blame yourself for this downfall
why dont we let this make us stronger
instead of letting it desintagrate everything we have took so long to build




Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-08-24 14:57:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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