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[title] => Can't Go On......
[time] => 2004-08-24 13:41:36
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[bodytext] => I feel like I just can’t go on,
In this place where I don’t belong,
Longing for everything to stop,
For all my pain to finally drop.
To live takes courage & strength,
I can not walk another length,
I don’t have either to keep me going,
Leave me to die as the wind keeps blowing.
I doubt that I will opt for suicide,
But I just can’t stay on this bumpy ride,
Don’t know what to do anymore,
Been banging my head against the cold floor.
Can’t go on feeling like I do,
Could you do it if it were you?
Would you live your life wishing you were dead,
When you should be enjoying life instead.
I wake up with thoughts of sadness,
I look in the mirror & witness the badness,
That seeps out of me every day,
I can’t carry on feeling this way.
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Can't Go On......
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:41:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I feel like I just can’t go on,
In this place where I don’t belong,
Longing for everything to stop,
For all my pain to finally drop.
To live takes courage & strength,
I can not walk another length,
I don’t have either to keep me going,
Leave me to die as the wind keeps blowing.
I doubt that I will opt for suicide,
But I just can’t stay on this bumpy ride,
Don’t know what to do anymore,
Been banging my head against the cold floor.
Can’t go on feeling like I do,
Could you do it if it were you?
Would you live your life wishing you were dead,
When you should be enjoying life instead.
I wake up with thoughts of sadness,
I look in the mirror & witness the badness,
That seeps out of me every day,
I can’t carry on feeling this way.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-24 13:41:36]
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:56:43 PM AEST
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| oh dear pixie...believe me i know how you feel but please stay strong...you are a beautiful person with a wonderful gift and i hope you will see how amazing you are and work through your pain and tour sadness. |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by zeroelysium on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:01:35 PM AEST
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| whoa i felt that... |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 02:58:51 PM AEST
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A powerful and descriptive poem. But before you plan anything foolish, please be aware that many people overwhelm themselves by looking at the total sum of their problems all at once. Just take one day at a time, and seek out a support system, if available. Try to think back to a time that was better to recall how that felt. The fact that you can feel the pain is a sign that you are alive inside. If you are willing to struggle with the pain, then there is hope. Look for some bright spots, I doubt that everything is bad.
God Bless,
Willofree |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by Kitty_cat on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:32:28 PM AEST
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That was an amazing poem, so much emotion in it. one day things will look up so dnt give up hope jst yet. u have an amazing talent, dnt let it go to waste
Catherine x
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:17:23 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie I pray with all of my heart that you will and can find the strength to go on. Whatever flows from inside of you can help to heal you thru your poetry. No matter what life throws your way (and its been throwing stuff my way constantly lately) please don't give up bec. you are earning your strength and you will and can make it thru this.
If you need me I am here.
Kie |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:29:59 PM AEST
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aw pixie
that is so sad, you are so talented and v special to me
love hXXXXXXXXXX |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 06:46:54 PM AEST
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hang in there ...it does get better i know this for a fact...each day no matter how down you are try to notice just one thing of beauty around you...then look for maybe two and so on...grasp every moment
Shari |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:06:28 PM AEST
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I know what ya mean girl I felt the same way at times but when I took a vacation it was so wonderful to get away from it all just set back and relax not thinking of nothing but enjoying my stay. maybe you need to get away take a long vacation it helps.
Brandy |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:11:04 PM AEST
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Pixie :-) we all have those days and times.
But it does get better. Keep faith in yourself.
Its early yet .
Whisper |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 04:09:27 AM AEST
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A real write, your not alone, many peolple have these days, but the mood will pass, just keep your chin up. Was a great write, very sad & touching, your pain is felt. Very emotional moving poem. -lovely-
Corinna |
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Re: Can't Go On......
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 03:46:04 PM AEST
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Sweetheart
Things have to change some day. Right?
You'll be okay. God bless you. |
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