Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:50:31 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 61235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Welcome Into My World [time] => 2004-08-24 13:01:10 [hometext] => An experiment in pattern ... thought I'd try something different [bodytext] => Welcome Night
Welcome Friend
Welcome Darkness
The hunt begins

Into Night
Into Dread
Into Darkness
You will be bled

My first Night
My first Kiss
My first Darkness
It was such bliss

World of Night
World of Red
World of Darkness
You are now undead [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Nazmythian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Welcome Into My World

Contributed by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:01:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Welcome Night
Welcome Friend
Welcome Darkness
The hunt begins

Into Night
Into Dread
Into Darkness
You will be bled

My first Night
My first Kiss
My first Darkness
It was such bliss

World of Night
World of Red
World of Darkness
You are now undead

Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2004-08-24 13:01:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Welcome Into My World (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:02:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good write

pixie xx

Re: Welcome Into My World (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:34:38 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Beautiful poet, devine friend.... This world that you exist in is very dark ad morbid. But I love it. I wish to live in it with you, but I now realize that I am in your world... Foreboding, dreary, and yet, sensual... You describe the life of a vampire so movingly, it's as if you actually are one. Scary, but a big plus for me! As I have stated before, I am extremely obssessed about these entrancing creatures of the Night... You seem to satisfy my hunger for them. Exellent flow and words. Standing ovation!!! I felt myself gradually succomb to you, wanting desperately to become a child of the Shadows. But the poem ended, and I came out of my trance and was thrown back into this heedless world... Enthralling write! Please write more!! A desperate plea from a disturbed girl! I thank you! All my love! Forever,

Your dearest fleur

Re: Welcome Into My World (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:21:57 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Interesting write.

Re: Welcome Into My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:01:58 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I wish to thank you for reading this particular piece. I was attempting to try some thing different and came up with this. It is probably my personal least favorite, and I almost feel as though I should apologize to all who read it instead.

Nazmythian ~
( thinks he will do just that ) I'm Sorry !!

Re: Welcome Into My World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 10:46:48 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Definitely interesting. flows good and has strong meaning. nice job

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com